
7/30/2021 c3 Guest
Nice set up.
Nice set up.
12/1/2016 c3 Namikaze Yuuki
This is Good! Though I'd like to ask do you update this every other year?
This is Good! Though I'd like to ask do you update this every other year?
9/28/2016 c3 FatherofApokalypse
How powerful is Naruto in this fanfic? I mean what powers does he have like kekkai Genkai.
How powerful is Naruto in this fanfic? I mean what powers does he have like kekkai Genkai.
8/21/2016 c3 UncleBlackPanther
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story
3/12/2016 c2
11seagate
Yeah I kind of lost all interest in this story when I saw Sakura and Madara were somehow still alive. It went from potentially good to terrible in a single chapter

Yeah I kind of lost all interest in this story when I saw Sakura and Madara were somehow still alive. It went from potentially good to terrible in a single chapter
3/12/2016 c3 Alister131
Nice job on this story. You managed to merge the two very well. I can't wait to see how it goes. You're not making Zeref be Madara though are you, or is Zeref now Sakura's kid? Yeah I'm betting the second option. Well hope to see the update soon.
Nice job on this story. You managed to merge the two very well. I can't wait to see how it goes. You're not making Zeref be Madara though are you, or is Zeref now Sakura's kid? Yeah I'm betting the second option. Well hope to see the update soon.
3/11/2016 c1 marquis.shax
from what I can tell from this first chapter this ISN'T a TRUE crossover you're taking away pretty much EVERYTHING that has to do with Naruto such as Chakra and the tailed beasts so he's pretty much just an OC in the Fairy Tail world the same as if I were to go an create a story about Naruto where I have him meet a boy with Pink Hair that's really good with fire nature chakra named Natsu who DOESN'T have Igneel sealed inside him or even ever met Igneel
from what I can tell from this first chapter this ISN'T a TRUE crossover you're taking away pretty much EVERYTHING that has to do with Naruto such as Chakra and the tailed beasts so he's pretty much just an OC in the Fairy Tail world the same as if I were to go an create a story about Naruto where I have him meet a boy with Pink Hair that's really good with fire nature chakra named Natsu who DOESN'T have Igneel sealed inside him or even ever met Igneel
2/20/2016 c1
2Chrisfragger
Taking his powers away and reducing his age? I had high hopes for this fic...

Taking his powers away and reducing his age? I had high hopes for this fic...
1/15/2016 c3
26JensenDaniels32
Dammit, just get to the present already! Who cares about the past? And Mavis using Chakra? Really?

Dammit, just get to the present already! Who cares about the past? And Mavis using Chakra? Really?
1/2/2016 c4 Guest
i think that zeref and natsu are sakura sons
that would make sense because natsu is dead and zeref is evil
i think that zeref and natsu are sakura sons
that would make sense because natsu is dead and zeref is evil