for A One Night Stand's Gift4/22/2014 c1 Random citizen
Please write more! I love this idea. It's just so rare! I really need some more feels. Help me out and write more soon!
Please write more! I love this idea. It's just so rare! I really need some more feels. Help me out and write more soon!
12/4/2013 c3 
7Sesshomarus'Luver
I really like this story it's so sweet and funny and it always manages to surprise me. And I could see in my mind the look on Garras face when he got called dad and Kankaru telling him just teach him stuff with the sand it's so cute I love it
7Sesshomarus'LuverI really like this story it's so sweet and funny and it always manages to surprise me. And I could see in my mind the look on Garras face when he got called dad and Kankaru telling him just teach him stuff with the sand it's so cute I love it
11/30/2013 c2 HappyReader
Great story. Please continue to update.
Great story. Please continue to update.
11/23/2013 c2 3clara200
Cute story the only thing that bugs me is his name. Gabriel is too western maybe his mom is fourien.
3clara200Cute story the only thing that bugs me is his name. Gabriel is too western maybe his mom is fourien.
11/23/2013 c1 182-feathers-and-a-stone
This is a good story the idea of Gaara as a happy drunk made me laugh! I think that you have a .lot of potential honestly. I will give you one criticsm for you and that is that you need to be more confient in your writing. I would of never questioned any of the things you mentioned didnt cross my mind but once I read that I was like "wait thats right!" which ruined a lot of this. Be confident you got this I'll be following!
182-feathers-and-a-stoneThis is a good story the idea of Gaara as a happy drunk made me laugh! I think that you have a .lot of potential honestly. I will give you one criticsm for you and that is that you need to be more confient in your writing. I would of never questioned any of the things you mentioned didnt cross my mind but once I read that I was like "wait thats right!" which ruined a lot of this. Be confident you got this I'll be following!
11/11/2013 c1 7Sesshomarus'Luver
I was iffy about this story at first but the more I read it the more enchanted I became. I found my lips twitching into a smile at Gaara's response. I just now got into naruto but from what I've seen so far( on episode 65) it's hard to see Gaara like this. But I love it it's cute and sweet please keep it up
7Sesshomarus'LuverI was iffy about this story at first but the more I read it the more enchanted I became. I found my lips twitching into a smile at Gaara's response. I just now got into naruto but from what I've seen so far( on episode 65) it's hard to see Gaara like this. But I love it it's cute and sweet please keep it up
11/11/2013 c1 Awesomeness2013
I'm your first reviewer:D so anyway, I think your story is great, I haven't come across a plot like this before, so I'll be looking forward to the updates. Maybe I should just do 5 reviews so you can get on with the story already. :)
I'm your first reviewer:D so anyway, I think your story is great, I haven't come across a plot like this before, so I'll be looking forward to the updates. Maybe I should just do 5 reviews so you can get on with the story already. :)