for Warriors The New Prophecy: Midnight A Redone Tale10/3/2014 c3 Flamestar
Oh this is awesome! Any story with FirexSand is a great story.
Oh this is awesome! Any story with FirexSand is a great story.
10/1/2014 c3 
6Silent Song of Stirring Storms
Awesome! Glad I'm not the only one who thought talking badgers was weird!
6Silent Song of Stirring StormsAwesome! Glad I'm not the only one who thought talking badgers was weird!
9/15/2014 c2 Fuzzyclaw
Aww, poor Darkstripe. I've always hated him, but now I feel a little bad right now XD
On this chapter, wow, an apprentice from another clan showing some respect! They have no respect for the leaders, I swear.
I like the way you're showing Firestar, too. He isn't acting like a Gary-Stu (unlike he is in most stories). About Blackstar, can you not make him evil? It's fine if you don't, but no one ever shows him in a good light and that's kind of irritating when he's one of my favorite characters. Thank you :)
Aww, poor Darkstripe. I've always hated him, but now I feel a little bad right now XD
On this chapter, wow, an apprentice from another clan showing some respect! They have no respect for the leaders, I swear.
I like the way you're showing Firestar, too. He isn't acting like a Gary-Stu (unlike he is in most stories). About Blackstar, can you not make him evil? It's fine if you don't, but no one ever shows him in a good light and that's kind of irritating when he's one of my favorite characters. Thank you :)
11/20/2013 c1 TribalRed
Well written opening; I can certainly understand your view on the series and appreciate the difficulty of what you're going for. I really like the direction you've chosen and can't wait to see more.
Well written opening; I can certainly understand your view on the series and appreciate the difficulty of what you're going for. I really like the direction you've chosen and can't wait to see more.