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4/14 c7 donttellthem
THIS is so SAD PAINFUL.
4/14 c5 donttellthem
im sobbinggg. ugly crying.
10/7/2021 c7 2one07
I don’t know where the story goes from here but this would’ve been an amazing place to end this short fic. I love sad shit, and this was def sad shit. Thanks for the feels.
8/9/2021 c7 Guest
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8/9/2021 c6 Guest
So sad..
8/9/2021 c5 Guest
So bittersweet, and a letter to Ero sennin, even now, is just so , heartful
8/9/2021 c4 Guest
Wuhatttt oh wsmapppp oh snap
8/9/2021 c2 Guest
I like Naruto’s letters to ero sennin , mixed in
8/9/2021 c1 Guest
I like this writing, and Naruto’s thoughts
10/2/2020 c4 3Yuzuki476
Thank you Thank you Itachi for creating the seal and TimeTravel? Awesome both naruto and sasuke can save everyone.
10/2/2020 c3 Yuzuki476
Sasuke you really are selfish aren't you?.
10/2/2020 c2 Yuzuki476
Well done with this chapter.
10/2/2020 c1 Yuzuki476
Oh my god no please don't let naruto die.
12/9/2019 c1 CandyBurst
Wow this is incredible. I love the mystery and suspense you’ve mixed into everything! I also absolutely adore the Naruto and Sasuke moments. Thank you for the wonderful read!
8/5/2019 c1 Silly
Really digging this fic. So well written.
Anyway proper review to come at some point. But for now I just wanted to take a moment to compliment your use of "rosette" to describe Sakura. I've never seen it before and it so totally works. Never thought I'd actually find a word that did, but everytime someone uses the rediclous "pinkette" I cringe sooo hard!
So yeah thanks for giving me an alternative I can use to mentally replace such instances, rather than having to rework the sentance entirely, cause that's seriously exhausting.

Anyway, I see the fic is unfinished. That's a real shame but it won't stop me from reading what you managed to grace us with.
Hope you're still out there somewhere, living your life, and perhaps still writing in some capacity. :3
Have a lovely day.
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