for As the Last Leaf Falls3/28/2019 c15 Mernom
Do far, the story is fairly confusing. Events happened with little foreshadowing, and plenty of plot threads are still dangling. I'm waiting for them to be tightened up.
Do far, the story is fairly confusing. Events happened with little foreshadowing, and plenty of plot threads are still dangling. I'm waiting for them to be tightened up.
3/26/2019 c8 Mernom
Time travel stories that don't focus on the time traveling characters are fairly rare. Let's see what happens next.
Time travel stories that don't focus on the time traveling characters are fairly rare. Let's see what happens next.
3/26/2019 c5 Mernom
Hmm. Future!Sasuke doing the massacre himself, leaving Itachi, past!Sasuke, and a few select clan members who aren't involved in the coup? Sounds like an interesting plan.
Hmm. Future!Sasuke doing the massacre himself, leaving Itachi, past!Sasuke, and a few select clan members who aren't involved in the coup? Sounds like an interesting plan.
3/26/2019 c3 Mernom
The princess went off to become a samurai, and the ninja took her place. Sounds like a setup for a joke if you ask me.
The princess went off to become a samurai, and the ninja took her place. Sounds like a setup for a joke if you ask me.
1/1/2019 c15 
1copet
Well, such a good chapter. I really like the story and the sacrifice both Naruto and Sasuke made. Still I'm more interested by the things they weren't able to solve and what will happen in the future. I will wait for the next chapter with excitement.
1copetWell, such a good chapter. I really like the story and the sacrifice both Naruto and Sasuke made. Still I'm more interested by the things they weren't able to solve and what will happen in the future. I will wait for the next chapter with excitement.
9/16/2018 c1 Mernom
Wasn't the neckless destroyed during the fight with Pain? Or does Tsunade not know that?
Wasn't the neckless destroyed during the fight with Pain? Or does Tsunade not know that?
5/19/2016 c15 Manillalu
Gaara is just too adorable. But ghe disjointed timeline is confusing. Kakashi? Frames formurder? Molotov mysteriously gone? So confused lol. The time travel death was so poignant-was crying that entire chapter
Gaara is just too adorable. But ghe disjointed timeline is confusing. Kakashi? Frames formurder? Molotov mysteriously gone? So confused lol. The time travel death was so poignant-was crying that entire chapter
12/17/2015 c15 Brenda293
Another beloved fic .The question is , where was I all this time ? Answer : I'm incredibly slow ! Hahaha . I really hope someday you will continue it . Because well , I love it ! Why else ! And thanks for sharing !
Another beloved fic .The question is , where was I all this time ? Answer : I'm incredibly slow ! Hahaha . I really hope someday you will continue it . Because well , I love it ! Why else ! And thanks for sharing !
12/17/2015 c7 Brenda293
I don't think Sasuke was OOC at all ! In fact he would ,maybe, have been like that , if his path has been different .
I don't think Sasuke was OOC at all ! In fact he would ,maybe, have been like that , if his path has been different .