for As the Last Leaf Falls
12/5/2015 c15 
2shelwynI ship it Garra x Temari you've done it again.
12/5/2015 c14 shelwynSo convoluted so Kakashi is in akatsuki now
12/5/2015 c13 shelwynPlot plot but honestly I feel like it ended chapter 7.
12/5/2015 c11 shelwynNot much emotional impact from her death.
12/5/2015 c9 shelwynHeh you attached them
12/5/2015 c8 shelwynI feel like it could have ended in the last chapter. An ultimate end sad and satisfying. It's nice to know what happened after but it could have been a satisfying ending.
12/5/2015 c7 shelwynOh wow. I'm crying really hard. Ah I'm so sad.
12/5/2015 c6 shelwynA bit anti climactic oh well
12/5/2015 c5 shelwynOh a few sad tears are coming out.
12/5/2015 c4 shelwynOh wow now this is cool.
12/5/2015 c3 shelwynOh What a twist the cat lived
12/5/2015 c2 shelwynI'm happy you wrote this one as well.
12/5/2015 c1 shelwynYeah start peeping now lol
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