for Dark12/29/2024 c3 behaissonia
Franchement j'adore le début surtout la relation Lucy - Lisanna, généralement on les retrouve en mode ennemis, ce qui est vachement ooc je trouve alors que là vous respectez vraiment le caractère des persos
Franchement j'adore le début surtout la relation Lucy - Lisanna, généralement on les retrouve en mode ennemis, ce qui est vachement ooc je trouve alors que là vous respectez vraiment le caractère des persos
4/26/2022 c20 DaisyDear
Well done! Beautiful character development through horrible trials. You portrayed the process well
Well done! Beautiful character development through horrible trials. You portrayed the process well
9/6/2018 c20 
1clover cat Klee
Whoa, first of all - totally in favor of the friendship between the girls! I personaly didn't quite think their 'perviness' at the beginning fitted the story, but it also wasn't too much of an obstacle, so that's okay I guess. Really liked that for all that there was magic means of helping her get over it it wasn't an instant fix, because those are presented way too often in ffs and it's just more reaylistic (though of course very sad) for it to be a gradual healing. That ending was reaallllly sweet:3
1clover cat KleeWhoa, first of all - totally in favor of the friendship between the girls! I personaly didn't quite think their 'perviness' at the beginning fitted the story, but it also wasn't too much of an obstacle, so that's okay I guess. Really liked that for all that there was magic means of helping her get over it it wasn't an instant fix, because those are presented way too often in ffs and it's just more reaylistic (though of course very sad) for it to be a gradual healing. That ending was reaallllly sweet:3
11/11/2017 c12 HereToStay20
ooops instead of it saying "Natsu struggled against Gray" I thought it said "Natsu snuggled against Gray" lol.
ooops instead of it saying "Natsu struggled against Gray" I thought it said "Natsu snuggled against Gray" lol.
6/25/2017 c14 Emanon101
.You probably may never read thus comment, but i truly do admire this story of yours. Okay, in any other cliche if Lisanna got raped everybody in Fairy Tail would hate Lucy for it. but this story took a different turn it made lasagna and Lucy friends and everyone in Fairy Tail even closer together and it even stronger. I'm not saying all those other stories aren't as great as this one, but this story is truly unique.
.You probably may never read thus comment, but i truly do admire this story of yours. Okay, in any other cliche if Lisanna got raped everybody in Fairy Tail would hate Lucy for it. but this story took a different turn it made lasagna and Lucy friends and everyone in Fairy Tail even closer together and it even stronger. I'm not saying all those other stories aren't as great as this one, but this story is truly unique.
9/24/2016 c20 Mwaaaaaa hahaah
I love this story
I love this story
9/18/2016 c6 Guest
"panty clad vagina" amazing
"panty clad vagina" amazing
9/18/2016 c5 Guest
is this gonna get anymore ooc lmao?
is this gonna get anymore ooc lmao?
9/18/2016 c1 Guest
cringe
cringe
5/1/2016 c20 2kurahieiritr JIO
A surprise wedding was totally a left field curve ball, but I liked it. Total Fairy Tail specific kind of believable to have a surprise wedding that everyone but the bride was in on to be honest. Really glad you shared this story with the rest of us.
2kurahieiritr JIOA surprise wedding was totally a left field curve ball, but I liked it. Total Fairy Tail specific kind of believable to have a surprise wedding that everyone but the bride was in on to be honest. Really glad you shared this story with the rest of us.
5/1/2016 c19 kurahieiritr JIO
I like the fact that Erza was so insistent on being the focal point, and that Yukino and Lucy being claimed were capable of calling all their keys to insure Minerva was destroyed outright. The fact that the hell bound and zodiac keys were willing to work with each other in such a way is also quite inspiring.
I like the fact that Erza was so insistent on being the focal point, and that Yukino and Lucy being claimed were capable of calling all their keys to insure Minerva was destroyed outright. The fact that the hell bound and zodiac keys were willing to work with each other in such a way is also quite inspiring.
5/1/2016 c18 kurahieiritr JIO
Nicely done chapter. Timing it so that Lisanna and Lucy both are drawn back into their bodies through mate bonds was a smart bit of thinking on Laxus part. Glad that Natsu also had the same idea in his often vacant head too.
Nicely done chapter. Timing it so that Lisanna and Lucy both are drawn back into their bodies through mate bonds was a smart bit of thinking on Laxus part. Glad that Natsu also had the same idea in his often vacant head too.
5/1/2016 c17 kurahieiritr JIO
Oh my, little Lisanna is a hydra huh? Seems to me that she's going to be one helluva hard to beat monster soul takeover instead of animal soul take over expert when all is said and done.
Yippee skippy about Lucy and Laxus deciding to become mates due to this crisis. Will hope to see van get his in spades even if Laxus and Lucy are no longer escorting his filthy butt to his own mother's ideals of execution. Hehehe.
Oh my, little Lisanna is a hydra huh? Seems to me that she's going to be one helluva hard to beat monster soul takeover instead of animal soul take over expert when all is said and done.
Yippee skippy about Lucy and Laxus deciding to become mates due to this crisis. Will hope to see van get his in spades even if Laxus and Lucy are no longer escorting his filthy butt to his own mother's ideals of execution. Hehehe.