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12/10/2013 c11 2Honeydukes' Howler
Your welcome and sometimes it needs to be a little bit dark so that the light will shine better. Can't shine if it's too bright! ;)
12/10/2013 c11 AkariNeMellia
cant wait for fairies to kick some ravens ass...love it n luv u...
12/10/2013 c11 2JcL107
Damn, take away Lisanna's uterus too? Will she be physically capable of returning to a previous state of nonharm and live as if it didn't happen (ignoring psychological and emotional impacts)? And is there any particular reason you chose North-East as the direction Ravel Tail's likely located?
12/10/2013 c11 XxShyxX
AWSOME XD
12/9/2013 c10 Guest
THE FEELS.
12/9/2013 c10 2Rosie Dreyar
That was a very emotional chapter. I cried. I think it was very well written and I can't wait for your next update. I haven't read a story like this before and I think it is great. Hope you update soon :)
12/9/2013 c10 2JcL107
For a chapter this dark, without the graphic descriptions of what Lisanna endured, I must commend you for bringing out so many fine emotions and details from the characters. It reminds me of a RoLu fanfic with a similar theme insofar that Lucy gets raped, though I can't quite recall who was the author of that one (I want to say Deathsembrace but not entirely sure). Great job and keep up the amazing work!
12/9/2013 c10 2Honeydukes' Howler
THOSE MOTHER FUCKING... SON BITCH...CAN'T...GAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! God I so hope that Lucy and Laxus get there revenge. Those stupid bastards are in for it now.
12/9/2013 c10 AkariNeMellia
love it...but it is painful to read it too...
12/9/2013 c10 7bookworm0313
I want blood! Ugh, I WANT BLOOD!
12/9/2013 c10 1SpooKyCovfefe
Well. Dark has sure lived up to the name
12/9/2013 c10 1BlueFiestaMockingjayPie
I'm crying right now...Lucy better get her revenge or I swear I'll somehow jump into your story and get Raven Tail myself!
12/9/2013 c10 blackcat486
I love this chapter i love it
12/9/2013 c10 XxXKiaXxX
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lisa-channnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
blonde babies awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww continue
12/9/2013 c10 XxShyxX
AWSOME CHAPTER THE DRAMA THE PAIN BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES XD
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