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11/23/2013 c4 2JcL107
Does Loke have some time in his contract where he can hang out on Earthland without having to respond to Lucy summoning him? But either way his action (or lack thereof) seems intentionally OOC. Keep up the work!
11/23/2013 c4 strawhat1227
I'm loving this story so far. I can't wait to read more. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for posting. .
11/20/2013 c3 JcL107
You evidently enjoy taking time to set up all the plot elements and prelude to the main storyline hinted by the summary. Keep up the work!
11/20/2013 c3 2Altairis vogue
I had look up what horizontal mambo was, hehe lissana. With the part about no girl has been able to figure out laxus, are you referencing to his past and implying that lucy could due to her having a similar expirence
11/20/2013 c3 19ArabellaIris17
This was short but amusing at the same time. Can't wait for the next chapter
11/20/2013 c3 XxShyxX
i hope you update soon
11/19/2013 c2 ArabellaIris17
this cracked me up. i almost cut myself while cooking.
11/19/2013 c2 3Moronandhersis
I love this update soon :) have fun writing the next part. or chapter
Moronandhersis
11/19/2013 c2 1jessjess3377
This is a fantastic story! I love Lucy and Lisanna's friendship! People tend to make them not have any sort of decent friendship, thank you for an original story!
11/18/2013 c2 1GingerLily01
This so far is a cute story! i like how for once Lucy and Lisanna are friends. its alot better than Lisanna being evil.
11/18/2013 c2 Guest
Laxus' reaction :D
11/18/2013 c2 XxShyxX
Those two girls are pervs ok i was hoping to see laxus at the shower but it was a bit funny
11/18/2013 c2 supercrazyperson
OMG that's too funny! Can't wait for the other chapter
11/17/2013 c1 XxShyxX
i hope you update soon
11/17/2013 c1 supercrazyperson
I love it it's too funny especially when gray is calling natsu flame princess and natsu calling gray ice queen! I can already picture them actually fighting it's too funny!
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