for Last of the First First of the Last11/27/2016 c5 
10Tempest Wolfe
This is a really cute story so far and I look forward to reading more of it!
10Tempest WolfeThis is a really cute story so far and I look forward to reading more of it!
4/7/2016 c5 Athena Kingdom
AWESOME! CAN"T WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE! THE REASON IM DOING THIS IS ALL CAPS IT BECAUSE IT SO SO AMAZINGLY AWESOME!LOL
AWESOME! CAN"T WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE! THE REASON IM DOING THIS IS ALL CAPS IT BECAUSE IT SO SO AMAZINGLY AWESOME!LOL
12/20/2013 c3 Pix
MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! WOMAN YOU MUST UPDATE! IT'S ALMOST CHRISTMAS WOMAN UPDATE FAST AS YOU CAN! and thank you for that sweet review to my story I enjoyed it.
MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! WOMAN YOU MUST UPDATE! IT'S ALMOST CHRISTMAS WOMAN UPDATE FAST AS YOU CAN! and thank you for that sweet review to my story I enjoyed it.
12/20/2013 c2 Pix
Ok, this story is just making me really sad. Why does my mind not imagine stuff like this! Seriously! I'm not kidding. It's not like I'm mad or anything I'm just really disappointed in my imagination. I mean seriously, wings, why didn't I think of that!? Ha, but this story is really good, KEEP THE IMAGINATION FLYING WOMAN!
Ok, this story is just making me really sad. Why does my mind not imagine stuff like this! Seriously! I'm not kidding. It's not like I'm mad or anything I'm just really disappointed in my imagination. I mean seriously, wings, why didn't I think of that!? Ha, but this story is really good, KEEP THE IMAGINATION FLYING WOMAN!
12/20/2013 c1 Pix
as soon as I read the part with the wings I said, 'WINGS! Dang her story's so much better than mine. Truth be told, it's a bit unfair. I was hoping it'd be like mine. Not plot wise but in the idea area. Wings beat crazy 13 almost 14 year old by a thousand. oh well. I tried my best on my story.
as soon as I read the part with the wings I said, 'WINGS! Dang her story's so much better than mine. Truth be told, it's a bit unfair. I was hoping it'd be like mine. Not plot wise but in the idea area. Wings beat crazy 13 almost 14 year old by a thousand. oh well. I tried my best on my story.