3/18/2015 c1 joaorcv97
Wow. What an amazing story. Very well written and you actualy gave Ahri a personality instead making her a shalow seductress. Bravo! The champion Ahri is thinking about is Master Yi if any of you guys are wondering.
Wow. What an amazing story. Very well written and you actualy gave Ahri a personality instead making her a shalow seductress. Bravo! The champion Ahri is thinking about is Master Yi if any of you guys are wondering.
11/20/2013 c1 1BookSyphilis
Wow...
This was beautiful! I am actually impressed of how you tried to describe Ahri, The Nine-Tailed Fox! Most people who write her tend to write her as a play-girl :P (Though it is true to some extent)
So you are new to the LoL community? Well as a fellow player myself I have to say...
Welcome to League of Legends!
If you need some tips on playing don't hesitate to ask me! (I only played around for a couple months but I'm playing some ranked games now)
The 13 Paged NoteBook
P.S. Just wondering, what Champions do you like to play as? I prefer to play as Top, Mid, Bot Support, and a little Jungling!
My favorite Champions are Olaf, Gragas, Sona, and Maokai!
Wow...
This was beautiful! I am actually impressed of how you tried to describe Ahri, The Nine-Tailed Fox! Most people who write her tend to write her as a play-girl :P (Though it is true to some extent)
So you are new to the LoL community? Well as a fellow player myself I have to say...
Welcome to League of Legends!
If you need some tips on playing don't hesitate to ask me! (I only played around for a couple months but I'm playing some ranked games now)
The 13 Paged NoteBook
P.S. Just wondering, what Champions do you like to play as? I prefer to play as Top, Mid, Bot Support, and a little Jungling!
My favorite Champions are Olaf, Gragas, Sona, and Maokai!
11/18/2013 c1 2Winkleson
Wow. That was pretty breath taking. I really enjoyed this one-shot and the emotions that were portrayed through it was... well astounding.
I tend to stay away from K rated fan fictions as they (more often then not) come off as a little childish and oblivious to more... mature subject matter. I am glad that you have overcome that barrier of mine in your depictions of Ahri's charm.
The mystery behind the man seemed a little spoiled to me due to your inclusion of which champions are in the story. I think there could have been a little more description thrown in to highlight the champions features even if everyone more or less knows what all the champions look like in the league.
Other than these two nitpicky points I thouroughly enjoyed this fanfiction and hope to see more from you!
As always... Best of luck in love, life and literature!
Wow. That was pretty breath taking. I really enjoyed this one-shot and the emotions that were portrayed through it was... well astounding.
I tend to stay away from K rated fan fictions as they (more often then not) come off as a little childish and oblivious to more... mature subject matter. I am glad that you have overcome that barrier of mine in your depictions of Ahri's charm.
The mystery behind the man seemed a little spoiled to me due to your inclusion of which champions are in the story. I think there could have been a little more description thrown in to highlight the champions features even if everyone more or less knows what all the champions look like in the league.
Other than these two nitpicky points I thouroughly enjoyed this fanfiction and hope to see more from you!
As always... Best of luck in love, life and literature!