for Lab Rats6/7/2015 c12 
16madam-fandom
Loved it! Some of those would be great as full length fics if you like them!~M
16madam-fandomLoved it! Some of those would be great as full length fics if you like them!~M
5/20/2015 c1 rapter9800
Wow, I've got to say, this is the most well-executed extended metaphor I've ever read in a Fanfiction. Very impressed!
Wow, I've got to say, this is the most well-executed extended metaphor I've ever read in a Fanfiction. Very impressed!
12/7/2014 c11 23baker's huntress
Ouch. #33 stung like crazy. Esp after rereading #5.
I'm so glad to see more of these. I love these little drabbles.
23baker's huntressOuch. #33 stung like crazy. Esp after rereading #5.
I'm so glad to see more of these. I love these little drabbles.
6/8/2014 c10 28notapepper
Yay, another chapter!
You tackled some pretty weighty moments in this. Well done. You manage to pack a real punch into 100 words.
I loved the first one because it tied in Fitzsimmons' past and present together so nicely. I really wish I could decide on what I think happened with Fitz's dad (I'll probably have to in order to move forward with some of my Academy fics) but I just have no idea yet, so I was curious when you mentioned it.
I love Fitz's mum just being all "Who, me?" after telling Jemma all about how Fitz used to crawl through the neighbors' dog door or whatever.
And I love Skye being so sure of herself because she's NOT a scientist. I like that attitude. When there's nothing you can do about a situation besides worry, you make a conscious choice to be optimistic. That is a good way to live.
28notapepperYay, another chapter!
You tackled some pretty weighty moments in this. Well done. You manage to pack a real punch into 100 words.
I loved the first one because it tied in Fitzsimmons' past and present together so nicely. I really wish I could decide on what I think happened with Fitz's dad (I'll probably have to in order to move forward with some of my Academy fics) but I just have no idea yet, so I was curious when you mentioned it.
I love Fitz's mum just being all "Who, me?" after telling Jemma all about how Fitz used to crawl through the neighbors' dog door or whatever.
And I love Skye being so sure of herself because she's NOT a scientist. I like that attitude. When there's nothing you can do about a situation besides worry, you make a conscious choice to be optimistic. That is a good way to live.
5/17/2014 c9 Guest
These are so great. Nice writing style!
These are so great. Nice writing style!
5/17/2014 c9 notapepper
Love at first read! The perfect assortment of gratification and frustration. These are like hors d'oeuvres and I'm feeling peckish! I'd read a full length version of any one, to be honest, but I suppose I'd most like to see 6-7, the Petrenko story, and the tux one expanded. Are you British? If not, way to do your research on the slang!
Love at first read! The perfect assortment of gratification and frustration. These are like hors d'oeuvres and I'm feeling peckish! I'd read a full length version of any one, to be honest, but I suppose I'd most like to see 6-7, the Petrenko story, and the tux one expanded. Are you British? If not, way to do your research on the slang!