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for my bakugan adventures

1/14/2015 c1 35Zero Slash One
.. I can't tell if this is a joke or not; if it is, it's not a clever or funny one. This stuff is riddled with grammar errors, and the plot is a fairly evident self-insert fic. Both of these are a big no-no in regards to writing.
9/9/2014 c1 23Samantha Peace HeartStar
Like I said in the other one it sounds interesting and I hope you continue it, although the beginnings were almost the exact same. In my opinion, you should add the other things you are crossing over with the story, oh and I don't think Digimon is the same thing as whatever it was that you crossed over with your other story.

- Sammy
12/13/2013 c1 King Spritzee
This is shit. Never write again.
11/20/2013 c1 28Sayuri Lapis
next time, try to make your stories make a lot more sense

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