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11/19/2013 c1 15HigherSilver
Aww, oh gosh, this is so precious. And probably the best English you've written with. I would remove "London POV, London writing a Note..." and everything after "For Zack Martin" because it feels unnecessary, and write a better summary, because more people need to read this! It's actually so pretty, gently rhyming and telling a little story. Don't take this the wrong way, but you should be writing Zondon poetry instead of your stories, because I think you could keep getting better.

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