for Synchromanica10/23/2015 c5 blackalive
Goddamit, I finally found a good makoto x oc fanfiction with decent grammar and chapter length, only to discover that it's been a year and a half since its last update? (ﾉಥ益ಥ）ﾉ
Goddamit, I finally found a good makoto x oc fanfiction with decent grammar and chapter length, only to discover that it's been a year and a half since its last update? (ﾉಥ益ಥ）ﾉ
1/7/2014 c1 Guest
Hmm, to be honest I don't really like your OC that much. I know she's supposed to be tsundere, but they're not really like that...
Hmm, to be honest I don't really like your OC that much. I know she's supposed to be tsundere, but they're not really like that...
11/28/2013 c4 
1GeminiSpark96
This is really great! I can't wait to read more. They way they act all flustered is really cute.
1GeminiSpark96This is really great! I can't wait to read more. They way they act all flustered is really cute.
11/27/2013 c4 Wished-On-A-Star
AW!
I liked that. It was a sweet chapter.
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When you gonna update again?
Now,I just have to read more chapters!
AW!
I liked that. It was a sweet chapter.
But...
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When you gonna update again?
Now,I just have to read more chapters!
11/26/2013 c3 1StarSonata
I'm grinning like an idiot over that dream. Akira's attitude towards him just makes me love the fact that she's there. Not only that but the set up so far for the festival makes me excited to read more. Cant wait for the next chapter.
1StarSonataI'm grinning like an idiot over that dream. Akira's attitude towards him just makes me love the fact that she's there. Not only that but the set up so far for the festival makes me excited to read more. Cant wait for the next chapter.
11/20/2013 c2 smollburrito
This is an amazing story, very well written! I can't wait for the next chapter!
This is an amazing story, very well written! I can't wait for the next chapter!
11/20/2013 c2 Reviewer
Hi! I like the idea of adding an OC for a fic, good job keeping everyone in character. Keep it up and please finish the fic... OwO
Hi! I like the idea of adding an OC for a fic, good job keeping everyone in character. Keep it up and please finish the fic... OwO
11/19/2013 c1 Smiles
I love your story please update soon!
I love your story please update soon!