for Mockingjay - An alternate ending2/28/2015 c12 Lea H
Wow... Its just awesome. I like it a lot more than the original 3
Wow... Its just awesome. I like it a lot more than the original 3
1/7/2015 c1 mikayla shadrix
Omg this is so fuk I love finnivk they can't kill him!
Omg this is so fuk I love finnivk they can't kill him!
11/6/2014 c12 Tori
Wow... I have to say I am very impressed. My biggest problem with Mockingjay's original ending was it lacked that sense of hope the first two books had. All in all it was very grim, and the characters never seemed truly happy in the end. In this, while you let some characters survive (thanks by the way) you didn't sugar coat it. Finnick survived but he didn't make it out without a scratch, he still have to do quite a bit of recovering and you didn't save everyone. You also didn't skip right to a 'Happily Ever After' you explained in detail their new lives. Thank you for this and honestly, I'd have to say I'd take this ending over the original. Maybe next time I reread Mockingjay I'll stop at chapter 22 and come here lol. Anyways, your a great writer. Never stop :)
Wow... I have to say I am very impressed. My biggest problem with Mockingjay's original ending was it lacked that sense of hope the first two books had. All in all it was very grim, and the characters never seemed truly happy in the end. In this, while you let some characters survive (thanks by the way) you didn't sugar coat it. Finnick survived but he didn't make it out without a scratch, he still have to do quite a bit of recovering and you didn't save everyone. You also didn't skip right to a 'Happily Ever After' you explained in detail their new lives. Thank you for this and honestly, I'd have to say I'd take this ending over the original. Maybe next time I reread Mockingjay I'll stop at chapter 22 and come here lol. Anyways, your a great writer. Never stop :)
1/3/2014 c1 
45octocelot
Hm. Interesting.
This is all very fast paced. I'm not sure if I like it or not.
Also, it would be great if you looked over your quotations. The punctuation that you use before quotation marks are not always correct. I'm sure you'll be able to fix them once you find them.
I do like the idea, and your voice is enjoyable enough.
Good work.
45octocelotHm. Interesting.
This is all very fast paced. I'm not sure if I like it or not.
Also, it would be great if you looked over your quotations. The punctuation that you use before quotation marks are not always correct. I'm sure you'll be able to fix them once you find them.
I do like the idea, and your voice is enjoyable enough.
Good work.
12/1/2013 c9 Guest
All of this is very brief and not detailed/fast paced.
All of this is very brief and not detailed/fast paced.
11/29/2013 c12 fandomluva2theend
I love this story! It's the perfect ending to a sad trilogy and I wish this was the actual ending. Keep writing and if you get flames learn from them but otherwise ignore them.
I love this story! It's the perfect ending to a sad trilogy and I wish this was the actual ending. Keep writing and if you get flames learn from them but otherwise ignore them.
11/27/2013 c12 DeathsHeadMoth
FABULOUS!
FABULOUS!
11/23/2013 c12 Guest
Loved it! Just read the whole story. Cannot wait for your next one. With your talent in writing, I would like to see you do a Peeta and Katnias dramatic thriller romance AU. Maybe where Peeta's life is in danger by a crazed female stalker, bringing Katniss to realize she truly loves him.
Loved it! Just read the whole story. Cannot wait for your next one. With your talent in writing, I would like to see you do a Peeta and Katnias dramatic thriller romance AU. Maybe where Peeta's life is in danger by a crazed female stalker, bringing Katniss to realize she truly loves him.
11/23/2013 c12 9Coesa Rudo
A perfect ending. I love this. I cant wait for more stories from you. And you made Finnick live! That's the best part. Finnick lived.
9Coesa RudoA perfect ending. I love this. I cant wait for more stories from you. And you made Finnick live! That's the best part. Finnick lived.
11/23/2013 c12 A-Mad-Girl-Back-Home
I saw Catching Fire Today! It was epic! Katniss, Peeta, Finnick, Johanna, mags everyone was perfect! But back to your story... It was perfect! I loved it and like I said before I love how you finnick and prim survived :) i kinda wish that Prim had married Rory and Gale had married Johanna but it's your story and I liked what you did anyway :) Can't wait for more stories :)
I saw Catching Fire Today! It was epic! Katniss, Peeta, Finnick, Johanna, mags everyone was perfect! But back to your story... It was perfect! I loved it and like I said before I love how you finnick and prim survived :) i kinda wish that Prim had married Rory and Gale had married Johanna but it's your story and I liked what you did anyway :) Can't wait for more stories :)
11/22/2013 c9 A-Mad-Girl-Back-Home
I love it! I really hope peeta and katniss get back together... Update soon please :)
I love it! I really hope peeta and katniss get back together... Update soon please :)
11/22/2013 c8 Coesa Rudo
Oh I love this! I just saw Catching Fire...it was way better than the first one and wow...just wow.
Oh I love this! I just saw Catching Fire...it was way better than the first one and wow...just wow.
11/22/2013 c8 OrionMellark
Oh yeaaah prim and finnick... Katniss voting yes :o is surprise me... finnick and peeta NO .. Yeah this two guys will be friends in future :)
Oh yeaaah prim and finnick... Katniss voting yes :o is surprise me... finnick and peeta NO .. Yeah this two guys will be friends in future :)