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101Lara1221
What the hell? Did you just combine eight comps.?
I mean, it was FANTASTIC, obviously. Yeah, awesome. Great job.
But that's insane.
101Lara1221What the hell? Did you just combine eight comps.?
I mean, it was FANTASTIC, obviously. Yeah, awesome. Great job.
But that's insane.
12/31/2013 c1 77TrueBeliever831
I really enjoyed all of these little moments between remus and dora. I think you characterized both of them well.
I loved the line 'this is perfect' that seems like the perfect little ending to all of the snippets.
amazing job. I loved this.
77TrueBeliever831I really enjoyed all of these little moments between remus and dora. I think you characterized both of them well.
I loved the line 'this is perfect' that seems like the perfect little ending to all of the snippets.
amazing job. I loved this.
12/6/2013 c1 66Runaway Renegades
I absolutely love them! Remus and Tonks are literally one of my favorite pairings of all time. I really liked how you wrote them in this and I really enjoyed the fic :)
66Runaway RenegadesI absolutely love them! Remus and Tonks are literally one of my favorite pairings of all time. I really liked how you wrote them in this and I really enjoyed the fic :)
11/26/2013 c1 deletes
This was sooo beautiful! I loved how you showed their relationship progress. It was so obvious that they cared deeply for each other. I particularly loved the last part, where Tonks is so adamant that they show their relationship in public. So impressive that you entered this in so many different challenges and comps too. It flowed beautifully throughout.
This was sooo beautiful! I loved how you showed their relationship progress. It was so obvious that they cared deeply for each other. I particularly loved the last part, where Tonks is so adamant that they show their relationship in public. So impressive that you entered this in so many different challenges and comps too. It flowed beautifully throughout.
11/23/2013 c1 13Naomi S. Goldson
And this is why I love you.
Not in a creepy way, I promise. It's just that you're writing is amazing and I just want to read everything. I haven't read one that I've disliked yet, and this is certainly no exception. I adore the first line; it was the most perfect description of their love (and many others', but theirs is the subject obviously).
These two are so cute.
Anyway. I really like the scenes you chose to write. You did a great job displaying the dynamic between the two, as well as the complexities of their relationship. You did a brilliant job keeping both in character. And the gifts? Ahh.. they're just so perfect for each other. And why can't everyone else in the world be as thoughtful as these two?! Man.
Amazing job.
13Naomi S. GoldsonAnd this is why I love you.
Not in a creepy way, I promise. It's just that you're writing is amazing and I just want to read everything. I haven't read one that I've disliked yet, and this is certainly no exception. I adore the first line; it was the most perfect description of their love (and many others', but theirs is the subject obviously).
These two are so cute.
Anyway. I really like the scenes you chose to write. You did a great job displaying the dynamic between the two, as well as the complexities of their relationship. You did a brilliant job keeping both in character. And the gifts? Ahh.. they're just so perfect for each other. And why can't everyone else in the world be as thoughtful as these two?! Man.
Amazing job.
11/22/2013 c1 95Eternally Seventeen
AAAHHH! *Squeals excessively*
I LOVE this pairing and I ABSOLUTELY loved this piece. The dialogues were a very important part of this story and it was freaking PERFECT! Tonks was so sassy and spontaneous and I WANTED TO HIGH FIVE HER ALL THE TIME :D And Lupin, adorable idiot that he is, you wrote him so exceedingly well!
The best part of this story was Lupin's gift to her. That, Laura, was PRICELESS. You are truly innovative and a brilliant writer! Keep it uppppp :D
95Eternally SeventeenAAAHHH! *Squeals excessively*
I LOVE this pairing and I ABSOLUTELY loved this piece. The dialogues were a very important part of this story and it was freaking PERFECT! Tonks was so sassy and spontaneous and I WANTED TO HIGH FIVE HER ALL THE TIME :D And Lupin, adorable idiot that he is, you wrote him so exceedingly well!
The best part of this story was Lupin's gift to her. That, Laura, was PRICELESS. You are truly innovative and a brilliant writer! Keep it uppppp :D
11/21/2013 c1 10J.F.C
This one-shot made me smile quite a lot, especiallyat the sscene where Dora reveals that she actually doesn't mind being called by her full name from Remus, and the other scene where the ballerina gift is revealed with all those extra enchantments to make her change her hair colour and stuff... so it would make her look more like Dora. I actually love that detail, and I can see Dora loving it even more. It's so like Remus to believe that such a gift wasn't enough. ;)
10J.F.CThis one-shot made me smile quite a lot, especiallyat the sscene where Dora reveals that she actually doesn't mind being called by her full name from Remus, and the other scene where the ballerina gift is revealed with all those extra enchantments to make her change her hair colour and stuff... so it would make her look more like Dora. I actually love that detail, and I can see Dora loving it even more. It's so like Remus to believe that such a gift wasn't enough. ;)
11/21/2013 c1 6Kisses Under The Apple Tree
That was very good. I love seeing stuff on Tonks/Remus cuz they seemed so mismatched.
6Kisses Under The Apple TreeThat was very good. I love seeing stuff on Tonks/Remus cuz they seemed so mismatched.