
2/18/2016 c20 AzureStorms
Really cool to see Emerald get some screen time and a little more detail of her personality. She seemed a little akward in how she went about doing the dastardly villain stuff, like she was phoning it in. Interested to see what Jaune can get out of her. Anyway great chapter, looking forward to more.
Really cool to see Emerald get some screen time and a little more detail of her personality. She seemed a little akward in how she went about doing the dastardly villain stuff, like she was phoning it in. Interested to see what Jaune can get out of her. Anyway great chapter, looking forward to more.
2/18/2016 c20 Guest
Ohhhhhhhh
Ohhhhhhhh
2/18/2016 c20
8Quathis
And so begins the slow battle of hearts and wills that will be Emerald and Jaune. Not that he'll likely be aware of the conflict, which I think will make it all the more hilarious. Until next time.

And so begins the slow battle of hearts and wills that will be Emerald and Jaune. Not that he'll likely be aware of the conflict, which I think will make it all the more hilarious. Until next time.
1/25/2016 c19 Guest
the story's great, are you going to continue?
the story's great, are you going to continue?
12/2/2015 c12 Guest
Oh god not penny oh god not penny why penny just Whyyyyyyyyyy
Oh god not penny oh god not penny why penny just Whyyyyyyyyyy
12/2/2015 c9 Guest
Run juane run
Run juane run
12/2/2015 c5 Guest
Off omfg just... Omfg I'm done life complete
Off omfg just... Omfg I'm done life complete
11/25/2015 c19
8TazalTerminals
This...is...THE BEST! I LOVE THIS STORY! PLS DONT GIVE UP ON IT!
Anyway hope to see you soon in the next chapter my friend.

This...is...THE BEST! I LOVE THIS STORY! PLS DONT GIVE UP ON IT!
Anyway hope to see you soon in the next chapter my friend.
10/28/2015 c19 TheBreacher89
Ah I'm absolutely loving this story :) Very sweet and funny. Cannot wait to see how Jaune's date with Yang goes (I expect explosions!) though I do hope he ends up with Weiss - out of the girls she is the best match in my opinion. She needs someone like Jaune who sees her as a person and not an heiress.
Ah I'm absolutely loving this story :) Very sweet and funny. Cannot wait to see how Jaune's date with Yang goes (I expect explosions!) though I do hope he ends up with Weiss - out of the girls she is the best match in my opinion. She needs someone like Jaune who sees her as a person and not an heiress.