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2/19/2015 c5 Guest
crumble at the seams*
2/5/2015 c18 PrOxMURDER
Whilst I've seen this motif, theme, hmm what's the word. Ah, screw it. Whilst I've seen stories and shows that have this "One at a time" thing, it never ceases to make me laugh. Hopefully you'll get around to updating a tad in the future, judging by the last updated tag. Anyways, gr8 read m8, 8/8 Would play again." - Not IGN because I wish not to catch a charge for impersonations (If that's a thing).
1/12/2015 c18 T3M5IK
Beautifully written. Please continue. You have my support.
1/11/2015 c2 1Selias
The paragraphs are a bit bulky.
12/5/2014 c18 xdaath
reading this fanfiction is awesome i can't wait to read more
11/16/2014 c18 Heckrothing
This. Was. So. GOOD!

I have marathoned through this since I first stumbled upon it. And I liked every chapter so far of this. Many thanks for this beast of a story!

Keep up what you're doing because what you're doing is obviously pretty well done!
11/11/2014 c15 Parker117
Oh, Ozpin...

This writing is excellent, by the way! I love it!

Keep writing!
11/9/2014 c18 CalligoMiles
This is truly one of the best romantic fanfics around, while it manages to stay lighthearted and humorous. Great job.
11/9/2014 c2 CalligoMiles
Really needed some lighthearted stuff after a long piece of dramatic Bumblebee...
10/9/2014 c18 3SlugSLinger
This story is aweome. Really, I've read a ton of Jaune-with-a-harem to know what makes it good and what doesn't. So far, this fic is a breath of fresh air among so many, uh, unsucessful RWBY fics that I'm honestly glad for it. Now if only the chapters were a wee bit longer...

Also, I have a suggestion to make. Some people may not like the official pairing this fic may lead to. I myself am looking forward to a JaunexRuby pairing, but that's me. Anyway, instead of ending it with Jaune choosing one girl, why don't you write a few more chapters where Jaune ends up with other girls, with one girl per ending chapter?

For example, in one chapter he might end up with Phyrra. In another, he might end up with Yang.

Regardless of what you choose, I can only hope that you can continue writing and improve your skills further. Have fun and good luck!
10/7/2014 c18 J.H.C
After reading this story, I am as interested in your story as to Blake with her books. How are you going to continue the story from here? I would think you could start the next date with either Ruby or Yang. All of this is comments and suggestions, I think for Ruby, you could have Jaune invite her to play at a somewhere exciting. For Yang, you could have her take the initiative and Jaune can plan it out from there. For Velvet, have Jaune and her be in the library or having lunch together. Lastly Weiss, another fancy dinner, maybe add a twist in it to add humor. I want to know if you have your opinion on who should Jaune choose or will there be a sort of a harem ending instead.
10/2/2014 c15 2LoveGlutton
Under what circumstance, Would old man ozzy be put in a scenario like that?
10/2/2014 c14 LoveGlutton
Ooooooooooooooooooooooohhh booooy
10/2/2014 c9 LoveGlutton
Do you know any good silly chase music?
10/2/2014 c6 LoveGlutton
This means WAR
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