for SheZow: Love Her or HATE HER!7/26/2015 c4 
93hyperpsychomaniac
This is pretty good. I like the detail you put into the cars and the weapons etc. I also like the reasoning for Boxter not being affected by the magic. Shezow needs someone on his side seeing as the whole city has turned against him, but it makes sense too which adds to the realism.
Not sure about the bold for emphasis in some of the sentences. In some places it came across as a bit shouty. Worked alright in actions scenes maybe.
But I want to keep reading this, so I'll get back to it when I actually have some spare time. D:
93hyperpsychomaniacThis is pretty good. I like the detail you put into the cars and the weapons etc. I also like the reasoning for Boxter not being affected by the magic. Shezow needs someone on his side seeing as the whole city has turned against him, but it makes sense too which adds to the realism.
Not sure about the bold for emphasis in some of the sentences. In some places it came across as a bit shouty. Worked alright in actions scenes maybe.
But I want to keep reading this, so I'll get back to it when I actually have some spare time. D:
9/28/2014 c1 Guest
It's not bad you put all the villains in one room.
It's not bad you put all the villains in one room.
9/5/2014 c7 Guest
This is awesome
This is awesome
8/24/2014 c7 Guest
impressive and awesome, please hurry with "mad dancing". i really didn't think that shezap will go to aid la bruja. shezow will really needs to get more allies
impressive and awesome, please hurry with "mad dancing". i really didn't think that shezap will go to aid la bruja. shezow will really needs to get more allies
8/23/2014 c7 Guest
Are you almost done with mad dancing chapter 1?
Are you almost done with mad dancing chapter 1?
3/3/2014 c7 3zigball
the two stories are awesome awesome story and line awesomely written and at some parts i was like whoa awesome no way and at the end the amity park thing i was like o my gosh you did not just do that o yes you did this is so awesome and i cant wait to read the third one im sure it'll be super awesome im sure its already out or something im a bit late but still yay
3zigballthe two stories are awesome awesome story and line awesomely written and at some parts i was like whoa awesome no way and at the end the amity park thing i was like o my gosh you did not just do that o yes you did this is so awesome and i cant wait to read the third one im sure it'll be super awesome im sure its already out or something im a bit late but still yay
1/23/2014 c7 9Slippery Tummy
.luna. DANNY PHANTOM! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I just died and came back to life inside. AMITY PARK SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! ok, calm down slips, be professional, this is going on the INTERNET. I love DP crossovers!
9Slippery Tummy.luna. DANNY PHANTOM! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I just died and came back to life inside. AMITY PARK SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! ok, calm down slips, be professional, this is going on the INTERNET. I love DP crossovers!
1/20/2014 c7 39mon-ra
Very interesting. I love how you compared life to chess and poker. Very true. And I'm guessing that 'Mad Dancing' implies that Ember will be taking part in this crossover.
As for Steven Universe or Dragon fic. I would go with Dragons. I just like that series more than Universe.
39mon-raVery interesting. I love how you compared life to chess and poker. Very true. And I'm guessing that 'Mad Dancing' implies that Ember will be taking part in this crossover.
As for Steven Universe or Dragon fic. I would go with Dragons. I just like that series more than Universe.
1/5/2014 c6 39mon-ra
Wow that was amazing, I must admit that I didn't see SheZap saving La Bruja. Can't wait to see what happens next. Love the Hobbit reference.
39mon-raWow that was amazing, I must admit that I didn't see SheZap saving La Bruja. Can't wait to see what happens next. Love the Hobbit reference.
12/23/2013 c5 Breana
SheZow you are so damn awesome I new you would find a way to break the spell La Bruja put on everybody oh and SheZow kick La Bruja's ass and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
SheZow you are so damn awesome I new you would find a way to break the spell La Bruja put on everybody oh and SheZow kick La Bruja's ass and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
12/24/2013 c5 mon-ra
Nice, you see what you can do if you do your homework Guy. Figures that his family had dealt with this kind of situation before and already had a solution to fix it. Clever of using the Shezow Side effects as an advantage.
Enjoy your vacation, Merry Christmas.
Nice, you see what you can do if you do your homework Guy. Figures that his family had dealt with this kind of situation before and already had a solution to fix it. Clever of using the Shezow Side effects as an advantage.
Enjoy your vacation, Merry Christmas.
12/18/2013 c4 mon-ra
I must say that this is getting interesting. As for your challenge, I'm going to guess by that 'Look good on my court date' statement that Guy is planning to fake his death. Either by using a double or some gadget that gives him the appearance of death.
I must say that this is getting interesting. As for your challenge, I'm going to guess by that 'Look good on my court date' statement that Guy is planning to fake his death. Either by using a double or some gadget that gives him the appearance of death.
12/14/2013 c4 Guest
It's going to be an emotionally moment for everybody is that the pun SheZow will use to break LA Bruja's spell
It's going to be an emotionally moment for everybody is that the pun SheZow will use to break LA Bruja's spell