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11/9/2014 c1 Guest
Good idea, but horribly organized and unfinished. You start a new paragraph EVERY TIME someone new speaks. Every time. If Will And Eve are bantering back and forth, every time someone different speaks, it's a new the ending is cut off. Otherwise, you've got the characters pretty nailed down and the writing itself is good. Fix those things, and you could continue this.
8/14/2014 c1 Ode to a Fangirl
This is nice! It has some grammar errors, but other than that, great!
4/1/2014 c1 CuteAnimeLover
Is this a oneshot? Because it sounds really good and I would love too see more.
Please turn this into an actual PeterXWendy love story or something
It sounds really promissing
1/31/2014 c1 3Songbook12
Keep going, its good!
12/4/2013 c1 13Daizels
Awesome story!
11/29/2013 c1 K
Update!
11/28/2013 c1 2Marimarina
I love your story, really ! Are you going to write more ?
11/25/2013 c1 AnnaViktoria
Is this a one shot or are u going to keep writing chapters? Cuz I really liked it :)
11/24/2013 c1 Guest
Are you going to write more?:D

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