
1/6/2019 c1 Dude
Naruto might have quite literally started a hyuuga civil war because of a lack of a strong leader candidate for clan head succession
Naruto might have quite literally started a hyuuga civil war because of a lack of a strong leader candidate for clan head succession
12/30/2018 c31 jj
yooo update this bro this is an awesome story
yooo update this bro this is an awesome story
11/25/2018 c31
9Safire Ranmako
Every time you end a paragraph /span/p
p style"margin-bottom: 0.35cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: 0.49cm;" align"left" pops up and continues on in what looks like one giant run-on sentence.

Every time you end a paragraph /span/p
p style"margin-bottom: 0.35cm; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: 0.49cm;" align"left" pops up and continues on in what looks like one giant run-on sentence.
11/21/2018 c31 Guest
SOMETHINGS WRONG WITH THIS CHAPTER
SOMETHINGS WRONG WITH THIS CHAPTER
11/19/2018 c31 dave
what the hell is up with this chap? it has all the HTML showing
what the hell is up with this chap? it has all the HTML showing
11/19/2018 c31 Jostanos
*shakes his head is disbelief* Alky, I know that you have done better with the fonts, etcetera, etcetera, but this chapter, and one in another story that I have recently 'reviewed', I humbly ask you to edit this before posting it and or another chapter. Thank you.
*shakes his head is disbelief* Alky, I know that you have done better with the fonts, etcetera, etcetera, but this chapter, and one in another story that I have recently 'reviewed', I humbly ask you to edit this before posting it and or another chapter. Thank you.
11/19/2018 c31
2jonathan.coster.73
Have to say hard to read do to the coding on the page might want to reset it

Have to say hard to read do to the coding on the page might want to reset it
11/19/2018 c31 DrayvenDrake
The formatting for this chapter is horribly broken.. Might want to reupload it. As it is its unreadable.
The formatting for this chapter is horribly broken.. Might want to reupload it. As it is its unreadable.
3/6/2018 c17 hi
NOOOOOOOOOOO!
NOT ITA!
I was hoping for some sweet sweet itanaru love, at least hinted at...guess that can't happen now.
NOOOOOOOOOOO!
NOT ITA!
I was hoping for some sweet sweet itanaru love, at least hinted at...guess that can't happen now.