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3/6/2018 c15 hi
naruto likes making people commit suicide, doesn't he?
12/16/2017 c30 Mobiuso
Your stories one of the few good ones out there. The only problem i see is that you didn't make the crossover as good as it could have been. A smarter naruto would have been sufficient.
12/8/2017 c29 Guest
awesome chapter. Loving reading your stories.
12/5/2017 c30 StrongGuy159
Cool 3 chapters (28, 29, & 30) continue please.
9/27/2017 c2 StoneTheLoner
And you just f*cking dashed my expectations. Good job at continuing the long held legacy of writing a retarded Naruto. It began in the canon material, and it's torch has been carried by nearly every idiot with a computer who thought a Naruto fanfiction would be a cool idea. Who needs intelligence and realistic reactions when you're Naruto f*cking Uzumaki (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡
9/27/2017 c1 StoneTheLoner
What the absolute f*ck are you doing? Everybody and their grandma can instantly tell if he's hiding something? You liked some contrived nonsense where Naruto hiding his worry led to some retarded reveal about who Tsunade had connections with? This new secretive Naruto pulls out all the stops during his spar, completely at odds with his paranoid and cautious attitude from earlier? And why did I have to read SHANNARO! a dozen f*cking times? I don't expect Naruto to be Light, but I absolutely expect Naruto as Light's successor to not be a complete idiot.
8/22/2017 c29 StrongGuy159
Cool 2 chapters (28 & 29) continue please.
8/22/2017 c29 7luffyxrobin-luffyxnami
After how long its taken for this to get more updates im pretty sure a lot of ppl lost interest in the story. Im mainly here to vent tbh because ever since ino and temari became narutos girls this fic has slowly been going downhill, it hardly feels like a death note crossover with naruto. I used to get excited to see this fic get an update, but as i said its been going downhill for a while. I hope any fics u make in the future are better then this.
8/4/2017 c26 1Raven of the Whiplash
Really cool story! It has a good premise and the plot flows well. Might need a once over to get some spelling errors and stuff (you spelled "What's" as "What'ss") but nothing too major at all. Can't wait for the next chapter!
7/27/2017 c2 Guest
Awesome fanfic, and i just barely read this
6/26/2017 c28 DBlade59
good to see a new chapter posted, only thing I can think to say is 1) to suggest that Naruto get/unlock ALL the techniques that were done with the Rinnegan 2) since you had his eye briefly show the EMS does that mean it's fully syncing with him and will allow him to use all of the eyes modes along with their abilities
don't remember if Black Zetsu was taken care of in the story (its been a while since I read the story) but if he is still around how about trapping it in a mini moon then launching into the sun/deep space or sealing it away with the Totsuka Blade
6/7/2017 c19 arinasution5
Uj
4/23/2017 c5 KeinNiemand
Shadow clone is B ranked not A ranked
4/22/2017 c3 KeinNiemand
Why can't gaara be revieved in thos story chiyo can revieve poeple no matter how long they have been dead
10/21/2016 c27 1dragonic raptor
this is an absolutely amazing story...a couple of hick ups on it tho...1...why was inari with his family when naruto and sakura escorted him to the land of iron to train as a samurai? the other one would be the time difference...naruto and sakura went on that mission when temari was on her way to the leaf after finding out she was pregnant...and had lil' gaara on way to uzushio...so that was around 5 to 7 months tops since they have seen inari's family...not years...just thought i would find out if u had figured those goofs out or not...otherwise it is fantastic. :D
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