11/26/2013 c1 72DrawnToDarkness
Oooh this is so intriguing! I can't wait to see where this story goes :)

I love Becker being defensive of Jess, and Jess being smart even if she didn't follow the scripts. MacLaren is a bit of an arse but I have a feeling he's supposed to be! And gosh darnit, why did he have to speak up when Becker was leaning towards Jess..?

Loving it! :)

11/25/2013 c1 Fairepeacock
I hope this is just the first chapter in a long story because it is an excellent start!