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11/26/2016 c1 Emperor-Aurora
Piss off Kishimoto lover, oh and your writing is absolute garbage as well.
12/1/2013 c1 30Avain1991
It's a great start and has lost of potential as a story however I would recommend one thing... it looks like your forgetting to use "" signs when people are talking. I've seen really good stories get lost of bad press because of little things like that. I myself get them every once in a while because I not the best when it comes to spelling and grammar. If you like I could beta this story and help with those little things? Completely up to you but if your interested PM me and we'll get to work

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