for Dragon Tail Z7/25/2021 c1 Guest
Dont listen to any of these maggots , Dont nerf anything .
Dont listen to any of these maggots , Dont nerf anything .
1/26/2020 c2 Darac
Tnx for telling us u are gona nail them to the floor with power now I can drop this goodbye
Tnx for telling us u are gona nail them to the floor with power now I can drop this goodbye
5/10/2019 c8 
1Sauwk
I beginning read this story out of curiosity and for now is not that goodFor now it's just plainly borring and the ship seem forced. I'm still gonna read it too, but I just hope the quality improve later
1SauwkI beginning read this story out of curiosity and for now is not that goodFor now it's just plainly borring and the ship seem forced. I'm still gonna read it too, but I just hope the quality improve later
10/2/2018 c1 pacatus214
You really need to proof read this story, the number of grammatical errors is insane. Also space out your dialogue some and try to be more descriptive of what is happening in the story, it’s very jarring to have things happen with little to no description, it’s easy to get lost.
You really need to proof read this story, the number of grammatical errors is insane. Also space out your dialogue some and try to be more descriptive of what is happening in the story, it’s very jarring to have things happen with little to no description, it’s easy to get lost.
9/29/2018 c1 Ax-zzzz
Hi revolve X. This fanfic is really beautiful
I'm Italian and I want ask you if I can translate this story and post it on Italians web site because I really love your fic and I want that Italians read it too.
Obviously I'll write that this is yours and that you are the jeanus here️.
Sorry for the grammar mistakes and thank you ️
Hi revolve X. This fanfic is really beautiful
I'm Italian and I want ask you if I can translate this story and post it on Italians web site because I really love your fic and I want that Italians read it too.
Obviously I'll write that this is yours and that you are the jeanus here️.
Sorry for the grammar mistakes and thank you ️
5/2/2018 c1 NightmareKnight1
I don't know why people never seem to know this... but space out your dialogue. You start a new line every time the speaker changes.
I don't know why people never seem to know this... but space out your dialogue. You start a new line every time the speaker changes.
3/12/2018 c27 d
when is the next chapter
when is the next chapter
12/1/2017 c3 Guest
Ssj x 15 multi instead of x 50
Sayians are naturally stronger than humans in DBZ lore..fairytail’s lore sayians are in the same class as dragon slayers. There is no ki...sayians have a higher magic supply than humans most humans. Zenkai’s still give them boosts. Sayians are as rare as dragon slayers.
Ssj x 15 multi instead of x 50
Sayians are naturally stronger than humans in DBZ lore..fairytail’s lore sayians are in the same class as dragon slayers. There is no ki...sayians have a higher magic supply than humans most humans. Zenkai’s still give them boosts. Sayians are as rare as dragon slayers.