
6/12/2016 c21 GSP224
So glad you decided to update your story... Great chapter and hope you update soon..
So glad you decided to update your story... Great chapter and hope you update soon..
6/12/2016 c21 ChosenOne358
That whole fortune teller thing straight from one punch man along with her death XD.
Not that i mind.
Overall good chapter, though there are some grammar mistakes.
Cant wait to see the next chater in 4 months this time :D
That whole fortune teller thing straight from one punch man along with her death XD.
Not that i mind.
Overall good chapter, though there are some grammar mistakes.
Cant wait to see the next chater in 4 months this time :D
6/12/2016 c21
2dmoose18
Glad you're back! The chapter itself was a little subpar, but it's to be expected if you were facing that large of a writer's block. I'd say it's a miracle you got the chapter done at all, so no sweat if this one isn't the best you've made :)
I'll be interested to see how things play out now, I didn't really pick up on any hints from this chapter but that's a good thing. I want to be surprised!
I hope you're able to write smoothly from now on, I really like this story!

Glad you're back! The chapter itself was a little subpar, but it's to be expected if you were facing that large of a writer's block. I'd say it's a miracle you got the chapter done at all, so no sweat if this one isn't the best you've made :)
I'll be interested to see how things play out now, I didn't really pick up on any hints from this chapter but that's a good thing. I want to be surprised!
I hope you're able to write smoothly from now on, I really like this story!
6/12/2016 c21
1The Grimmjow
Pretty good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next ones you will write.

Pretty good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next ones you will write.
6/10/2016 c20 Yo
I dont understand trunks already could go ss2 he just wasn't fast enough during ss2
I dont understand trunks already could go ss2 he just wasn't fast enough during ss2
6/10/2016 c4 The Dictator
It would rock if u throw in gonna with Erza but make that happen like three or four years later
It would rock if u throw in gonna with Erza but make that happen like three or four years later
4/26/2016 c20 Guest
Continue please!
Continue please!
4/23/2016 c20
65RedDragonforce 1
I'm not sure you're aware of this, but who is 'Charles'? The white cat's name is CARLA!
That's kinda the only thing I have to criticize you about. Good job otherwise!

I'm not sure you're aware of this, but who is 'Charles'? The white cat's name is CARLA!
That's kinda the only thing I have to criticize you about. Good job otherwise!
4/17/2016 c20
1tsun
Why did they let him take always without explanation? That kind of thing isn't allowed without proper explanation. Its kinda bullish*t if you ask me.

Why did they let him take always without explanation? That kind of thing isn't allowed without proper explanation. Its kinda bullish*t if you ask me.
3/29/2016 c20 Super sayian God
I think it would be cool if bojack's team came and interrupt the games
I think it would be cool if bojack's team came and interrupt the games
3/26/2016 c2 son goku 321
Hey man I have a great idea! !why don't you let the
Bojok team interfere the grand games that would be rock! !
Hey man I have a great idea! !why don't you let the
Bojok team interfere the grand games that would be rock! !
3/26/2016 c1 son goku 321
Hey man come on update already
!it's been 2 months !
Hey man come on update already
!it's been 2 months !