for Surviving Isn't Living10/25/2014 c4 
19CrazyFM
Poor John, I hope there will be more chapters soon, I really like reading this. Oh and naming the chapters so they will spell Moriarty is a great idea
19CrazyFMPoor John, I hope there will be more chapters soon, I really like reading this. Oh and naming the chapters so they will spell Moriarty is a great idea
10/25/2014 c2 CrazyFM
Irene Adler!
At least I think so, very good beginning, I normally don't read stories post tRF but this story line made me curious. It really good sofar and I am looking forward for the next chapter :-)
Irene Adler!
At least I think so, very good beginning, I normally don't read stories post tRF but this story line made me curious. It really good sofar and I am looking forward for the next chapter :-)
12/5/2013 c4 20blueskydog
Interesting premise but there are quite a few typos and you keep switching tenses. Also, you sometimes switch to first person ("I") instead of third person ("she"). Might want to proofread the next chapters more carefully. Looking forward to the rest.
20blueskydogInteresting premise but there are quite a few typos and you keep switching tenses. Also, you sometimes switch to first person ("I") instead of third person ("she"). Might want to proofread the next chapters more carefully. Looking forward to the rest.