12/31/2017 c1 46Hikari Nova
interesting though the small bit of 1st person was annoying

8/30/2014 c7 strabimonx
Nicee

12/1/2013 c2 13greekgeekspywannabe
I liked how you did rose, sis! very funny! I liked working on it with you yesterday. You did an excelent job, but I will fix spelling next time.