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6/8 c25 dacra malfoy56
this is awesome need new chapter within time
2/23 c25 Guest
Can't wait for the rest of the story
7/27/2019 c25 Nagisa Acchan
Magic . Your history's is very nice and interesting
4/24/2019 c18 dwynn12
omg it's like elsa
4/15/2019 c25 bella.beau.14
Mire plz
3/13/2019 c25 4Saphira455
There we go, now I'm all caught up.
If you ever need a beta reader or somebody to talk ideas over with, I would love to help. I still enjoy the story and your writing has improved a lot since the first chapter.
3/13/2019 c18 Saphira455
I do feel like this Ciel wouldn't forget about his brother completely through the entire fiasco and trip home. Maybe he would have noticed earlier and been panicking on the way home?
3/13/2019 c16 Saphira455
Ah, here is a suggestion: if you have something you want to comment on in the story, leave an asterisk, then at the bottom of the story, put an asterisk there and then the Author's Note.
An A/N in the middle of the chapter can remove the immersion of the story too easily.

P.S. I don't think I got the reference.
3/12/2019 c13 Saphira455
A few things moved a bit fast for my liking, but I'm still enjoying the story.
3/12/2019 c4 Saphira455
I won't say this is professional grade stuff, but I do enjoy the story and so far like where you are going and what you are trying!
2/27/2019 c25 James Birdsong
Good. Maybe cool or perhaps great.
2/26/2019 c25 Nagilover4ever
Love it. Update soon.
2/25/2019 c25 58randomplotbunny
Ciel is an insecure turtle so it's good to Hadrian pulling him from his shell a bit. :-)
2/24/2019 c25 4FANactic Writer
Love the chapter!~
2/24/2019 c25 1Sakihinata
Hahaha, they're really brothers ;)
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