for Broken Mantra Bleeding1/13/2014 c1 
11Scandalpants
Um...wow. I read this and feel completely hollowed out, just freaking empty. Which is an enormous compliment. So dark and beautifully written, I felt I was inside each of them. And I was drowning. Well done.
11ScandalpantsUm...wow. I read this and feel completely hollowed out, just freaking empty. Which is an enormous compliment. So dark and beautifully written, I felt I was inside each of them. And I was drowning. Well done.
11/30/2013 c1 Calypso
Brilliant piece of writing! Very very well written, I loved that you integrated Mac into this. We need more Mac. And this story was heart-breaking, but in a good way. Like you meant it to be sad, and now thanks to your carefully selected words and phrases and grammar construction my heart is aching. "(I don't want to lose from my life either. You're out of my life forever.) (Still love me?) (Yeah.)" brought out so many feels. Keep writing!
Brilliant piece of writing! Very very well written, I loved that you integrated Mac into this. We need more Mac. And this story was heart-breaking, but in a good way. Like you meant it to be sad, and now thanks to your carefully selected words and phrases and grammar construction my heart is aching. "(I don't want to lose from my life either. You're out of my life forever.) (Still love me?) (Yeah.)" brought out so many feels. Keep writing!