for Winter Wonderland4/8/2019 c1 
3PastOneonta
This is very good. How awkward for Peter! Neal didn't overplay it at all. I loved the 'plausible deniability' to protect both of them, really. Thanks for writing.
3PastOneontaThis is very good. How awkward for Peter! Neal didn't overplay it at all. I loved the 'plausible deniability' to protect both of them, really. Thanks for writing.
2/12/2018 c1 73inkandpaperqwerty
this was really cute, and I felt it stayed true to character. not too fluffy to be realistic, but still fluffy enough to love. just a note, though, picking locks isn't illegal in and of itself. if Peter gave him permission, there would be no crime. also, he was not outside long enough to get frostbite or even frostnip; just cold hands. those two things sort of drew away from the aspect of realism, but I don't think they were so distracting that they impacted the story as a whole. just messed with the flow a little bit. thanks for sharing! it really was a wonderful story.
73inkandpaperqwertythis was really cute, and I felt it stayed true to character. not too fluffy to be realistic, but still fluffy enough to love. just a note, though, picking locks isn't illegal in and of itself. if Peter gave him permission, there would be no crime. also, he was not outside long enough to get frostbite or even frostnip; just cold hands. those two things sort of drew away from the aspect of realism, but I don't think they were so distracting that they impacted the story as a whole. just messed with the flow a little bit. thanks for sharing! it really was a wonderful story.
11/6/2017 c1 2jacks marie
Loved this.I am just getting into White is one of the best I've read so far..You should write more.
2jacks marieLoved this.I am just getting into White is one of the best I've read so far..You should write more.
3/19/2016 c1 JimChou
That was such a lovely story! The friendship and banter between those two was so true; it could have been on screen. I loved the ending on the sofa too; so cute!
That was such a lovely story! The friendship and banter between those two was so true; it could have been on screen. I loved the ending on the sofa too; so cute!
5/24/2014 c1 Guest
Great story, well written. Don't know how I missed this when you first wrote it!
Great story, well written. Don't know how I missed this when you first wrote it!
11/30/2013 c1 Stroma
Very good.
Very good.
11/30/2013 c1 Guest
Fun story
Fun story
11/30/2013 c1 12Crystalzap
lol cute, though the fluffyness at the end was a little ooc but still funny ;D
12Crystalzaplol cute, though the fluffyness at the end was a little ooc but still funny ;D