for Cradle of the Uchiha Clan6/17/2023 c4 krzychu14x
Would love to see this story comeback to life, the idea was quite unique and first few chapters gave a lot of hope for the future ones!
Would love to see this story comeback to life, the idea was quite unique and first few chapters gave a lot of hope for the future ones!
8/15/2022 c1 TommyMS
Im suprised theres no cliche scene in this fanfic and actually i feel like reading the work from profesional writer, this fanfic deserve more.
Im suprised theres no cliche scene in this fanfic and actually i feel like reading the work from profesional writer, this fanfic deserve more.
2/25/2022 c2 
5andytak3740
...I like the story. But, it's hindered by the exposition and dialogue. Essentially, you explain the context behind topics that most readers can already infer. Secondly, your characters speak grammatically correct. The average person speaks broken English. This means that humans tend to condense and modify dialogue and vocabulary to suit their needs.
5andytak3740...I like the story. But, it's hindered by the exposition and dialogue. Essentially, you explain the context behind topics that most readers can already infer. Secondly, your characters speak grammatically correct. The average person speaks broken English. This means that humans tend to condense and modify dialogue and vocabulary to suit their needs.
11/8/2021 c4 MeMeMooMoo
All these brain dead "I don't tell him for his own protection" reasons in all these awful, brain dead stories make zero sense. THE HOKAGE HAS FAMILY RUNNING AROUND WITHOUT PROTECTION. WHERE'S THERE IGNORANCE OF FAMILY?
Glad you're gone. We don't need any more of youur brain dead garbage being spewed onto the internet. Delete this trash story and your profile.
All these brain dead "I don't tell him for his own protection" reasons in all these awful, brain dead stories make zero sense. THE HOKAGE HAS FAMILY RUNNING AROUND WITHOUT PROTECTION. WHERE'S THERE IGNORANCE OF FAMILY?
Glad you're gone. We don't need any more of youur brain dead garbage being spewed onto the internet. Delete this trash story and your profile.
2/19/2021 c4 God damn it
It's good I'm just wondering when it's going to get updated
It's good I'm just wondering when it's going to get updated
1/3/2021 c4 Guest
This is an adorable chapter, Naruto "playing" with one of the most OP Kekkei Genkai in his world (which, if I'm to be honest, is something I would've done if I were in his place), and then buying Sayuri tomato bread just to apologize to her.
I can imagine Naruto will, in the future, try and possibly eventually become a master of making tomato-based food solely to give to Sayuri, and Sayuri herself might love Naruto's cooking the best out of everyone's cooking, possibly even more than Mikoto's cooking. That would be so adorable. :)
For Naruto's Sharingan, I'm guessing that if it will evolve into the Mangekyou, it might not have the blinding effect like the Canon Mangekyou? I mean, since the Sharingan is as rare as the Mokuton, there won't be a second pair of Mangekyou to transplant to turn them into the EMS? Or, do you possibly plan to give Naruto the Canon Mangekyou (that will go blind), but it would then (with the right intense emotional stimulation) evolve further into the EMS on it's own (without needing a transplant)? Like, as an example, Naruto's Mangekyou would look like Canon Sasuke's, and then Naruto's EMS would evolve again and would look like Sasuke's EMS after transplanting Itachi's eyes?
I guess I'll just see for myself in future updates of this story, if and when you will be willing and able to update eventually. Or rewrite it again, up to you.
I know it's late, but happy new year to you, fingers crossed that 2021 will be at least a little better than last year. Hope you and those close to you are safe and happy out there.
This is an adorable chapter, Naruto "playing" with one of the most OP Kekkei Genkai in his world (which, if I'm to be honest, is something I would've done if I were in his place), and then buying Sayuri tomato bread just to apologize to her.
I can imagine Naruto will, in the future, try and possibly eventually become a master of making tomato-based food solely to give to Sayuri, and Sayuri herself might love Naruto's cooking the best out of everyone's cooking, possibly even more than Mikoto's cooking. That would be so adorable. :)
For Naruto's Sharingan, I'm guessing that if it will evolve into the Mangekyou, it might not have the blinding effect like the Canon Mangekyou? I mean, since the Sharingan is as rare as the Mokuton, there won't be a second pair of Mangekyou to transplant to turn them into the EMS? Or, do you possibly plan to give Naruto the Canon Mangekyou (that will go blind), but it would then (with the right intense emotional stimulation) evolve further into the EMS on it's own (without needing a transplant)? Like, as an example, Naruto's Mangekyou would look like Canon Sasuke's, and then Naruto's EMS would evolve again and would look like Sasuke's EMS after transplanting Itachi's eyes?
I guess I'll just see for myself in future updates of this story, if and when you will be willing and able to update eventually. Or rewrite it again, up to you.
I know it's late, but happy new year to you, fingers crossed that 2021 will be at least a little better than last year. Hope you and those close to you are safe and happy out there.
12/26/2020 c4 Guest
I'm not sure if you would or could possibly see this review considering how long it has been since you updated this story, and I don't know if you've lost interest and/or your passion for it, but I still want to say this and get it of my chest.
I LOVE this story and it's premise, making the Sharingan (and possibly the Mangekyou/EMS) a Kekkei Genkai as rare as the Mokuton. And while the Uchiha Clan won't have it, it DEFINITELY doesn't make them obsolete or any less weak than their Rival Clans (Senju, Hyuga, etc.), despite how some fans MIGHT think otherwise. I mean, according to Canon (from my perspective), they would STILL have their own powerful Chakra, their Fire Jutsu, and still be unmatched Warriors/Shinobi in their own right WITHOUT the Sharingan.
Along with that, Naruto x Female Sasuke is my NUMBER ONE favorite pairing in Naruto Fandom, as strange as that might seem, I can't help but sometimes wonder how the Canon Story would be if Sasuke was a girl instead. I simply can't help but feel like this pairing just clicks for me, if that makes sense. And it makes me sad that after all these years, there aren't that many stories with this pairing, ESPECIALLY a single/monogamous pairing, let alone a COMPLETED story.
And, on top of all that, you're simply one of my TOP MOST FAVORITE Romance Authors on FanFiction. You were one of the VERY FIRST Authors I stumbled across on this website when I first started browsing it YEARS ago. I fell in love with your stories and writing style, and I always look forward to any updates you would hopefully upload one day.
I know you have your own life and very likely have your own things to deal with, and I deeply apologize if I seem demanding, but I implore you, please at least consider updating or even rewriting this story again, because it would simply make me immensely happy to read this to the end.
Thank you for your time, happy holidays, and I hope you and your loved ones are safe, healthy, and happy out there.
I'm not sure if you would or could possibly see this review considering how long it has been since you updated this story, and I don't know if you've lost interest and/or your passion for it, but I still want to say this and get it of my chest.
I LOVE this story and it's premise, making the Sharingan (and possibly the Mangekyou/EMS) a Kekkei Genkai as rare as the Mokuton. And while the Uchiha Clan won't have it, it DEFINITELY doesn't make them obsolete or any less weak than their Rival Clans (Senju, Hyuga, etc.), despite how some fans MIGHT think otherwise. I mean, according to Canon (from my perspective), they would STILL have their own powerful Chakra, their Fire Jutsu, and still be unmatched Warriors/Shinobi in their own right WITHOUT the Sharingan.
Along with that, Naruto x Female Sasuke is my NUMBER ONE favorite pairing in Naruto Fandom, as strange as that might seem, I can't help but sometimes wonder how the Canon Story would be if Sasuke was a girl instead. I simply can't help but feel like this pairing just clicks for me, if that makes sense. And it makes me sad that after all these years, there aren't that many stories with this pairing, ESPECIALLY a single/monogamous pairing, let alone a COMPLETED story.
And, on top of all that, you're simply one of my TOP MOST FAVORITE Romance Authors on FanFiction. You were one of the VERY FIRST Authors I stumbled across on this website when I first started browsing it YEARS ago. I fell in love with your stories and writing style, and I always look forward to any updates you would hopefully upload one day.
I know you have your own life and very likely have your own things to deal with, and I deeply apologize if I seem demanding, but I implore you, please at least consider updating or even rewriting this story again, because it would simply make me immensely happy to read this to the end.
Thank you for your time, happy holidays, and I hope you and your loved ones are safe, healthy, and happy out there.
9/22/2020 c4 Guest
I believe the story is well written sof far, but it has been years since you have updated. I hope you do but if you don't we understand but I encourage you to continue.
I believe the story is well written sof far, but it has been years since you have updated. I hope you do but if you don't we understand but I encourage you to continue.
4/27/2020 c4 Guest
Please update this is a really nice story and I would hate for it to go to waste
Please update this is a really nice story and I would hate for it to go to waste