for Minato Creed and Kushina Darkholme1/18/2014 c1 Batros940
So this is to punish Minato And Kushina when they sacrificed their lives so Naruto could have the abilities to deal with his enemies in the future. Not to mention it was The sandaime who should have considered the effects of informing the village about Naruto's burden and then consider the pros and cons of it.
So this is to punish Minato And Kushina when they sacrificed their lives so Naruto could have the abilities to deal with his enemies in the future. Not to mention it was The sandaime who should have considered the effects of informing the village about Naruto's burden and then consider the pros and cons of it.
1/15/2014 c5 
111mr grimjaw
good but needs more diealog details and fights this sounds like you telling the story not thru the chacters
111mr grimjawgood but needs more diealog details and fights this sounds like you telling the story not thru the chacters