for The New Witch's House8/12/2021 c1 Ina
My god.. that was saucy as hell..
My god.. that was saucy as hell..
1/8/2017 c7 watchMoreAnimeYouMust
I had so much fun reading this story!
It's wonderful to stumble across gems like this.
I really hope you decide to write a sequel to this story one day! XD
Kind regards,
Johan
I had so much fun reading this story!
It's wonderful to stumble across gems like this.
I really hope you decide to write a sequel to this story one day! XD
Kind regards,
Johan
1/8/2017 c2 watchMoreAnimeYouMust
I'm LOVING this story!
I stumbled upon it completely at random, and am so very glad i did!
I never would have thought a story about the Witch's House could actually be good, but how wrong you've proven me today!
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
I'm LOVING this story!
I stumbled upon it completely at random, and am so very glad i did!
I never would have thought a story about the Witch's House could actually be good, but how wrong you've proven me today!
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
10/31/2015 c7 Pierrot
Oh. My. God. I KNEW it!
Dawn WAS connected to Aya! Holycrap!
Oh. My. God. I KNEW it!
Dawn WAS connected to Aya! Holycrap!
8/24/2015 c7 ch3n
...aya... we finally meet again. WHAT DID YOU DO TO THAT POOR GIRL YOU LITTLE HYPOCRITE DID YOU GOUGE HER EYES OUT WHAT THE SHIT AYA
...aya... we finally meet again. WHAT DID YOU DO TO THAT POOR GIRL YOU LITTLE HYPOCRITE DID YOU GOUGE HER EYES OUT WHAT THE SHIT AYA
8/15/2015 c6 
8Lunar Adept
Interesting way to finish off this story. I had expected you to do much more with Dawn's character since you had such a nice set up for it. Nontheless, congrats on finishing this!
8Lunar AdeptInteresting way to finish off this story. I had expected you to do much more with Dawn's character since you had such a nice set up for it. Nontheless, congrats on finishing this!
8/15/2015 c6 5Alinae0011
YASSSS YOU UPDATED IT! LETS PARTY!
I LOVED THIS CHAPPIE SOOO MUCH! ELLEN AND VIOLA ARE MY OTP!1
5Alinae0011YASSSS YOU UPDATED IT! LETS PARTY!
I LOVED THIS CHAPPIE SOOO MUCH! ELLEN AND VIOLA ARE MY OTP!1
5/6/2015 c5 Conor
Whole story is great. I'm quite relieved that someone made a happy aftermath to such a game. A lot of depressing revenge fan fictions out there. I prefer stories with a happy ending. It could end here, although it leaves some unanswered stuff. Biggest is Viola's (Ellen's step dad as well I guess?) dad and how the hell he'll react to all this stuff: "So that monster was my little girl (I shot)? You aren't my original daughter? You're wearing such a revealing outfit? Etc." Also, will they switch bodies back? I doubt it since it's been five years and stuff. Will Dawn's mom make an appearance? While it's perfectly fine to end it here, there is still other things that can be done if you wish. Hope it's continued some day, but if not, would like to know so I am not futilely waiting for something that never comes.
Whole story is great. I'm quite relieved that someone made a happy aftermath to such a game. A lot of depressing revenge fan fictions out there. I prefer stories with a happy ending. It could end here, although it leaves some unanswered stuff. Biggest is Viola's (Ellen's step dad as well I guess?) dad and how the hell he'll react to all this stuff: "So that monster was my little girl (I shot)? You aren't my original daughter? You're wearing such a revealing outfit? Etc." Also, will they switch bodies back? I doubt it since it's been five years and stuff. Will Dawn's mom make an appearance? While it's perfectly fine to end it here, there is still other things that can be done if you wish. Hope it's continued some day, but if not, would like to know so I am not futilely waiting for something that never comes.
5/1/2015 c5 ch3n
THIS. IS. UNEXPECTED. SUPER POWERFUL WITCH VIOLA?! OH MY GOSH THIS IS INSAAAANNNELY ONE OF THE GREATEST PLOT. EVER. PLUS WITH YOUR WRITING STYLE, I WANT TO READ MORE AND MORE AND MOOOOREEEE. GAAAAAAHHHH CANT STOP USING CAPS! MY FEELINGS FOR THIS FANFICTION IS SOOOOOOO BIG THE WORDS I TYPED GOT BIGGER TOO. AND OH WOW. I. LOVE. THIS. BUT IM A LIL SAD BECAUSE VIOLA TOPS. TCH. I WAS REAAAALLY HOPING ELLEN TOPS Y'KNOW. BASICALLY ELLEN'S BODY TOPS BUT VIOLA'S MIND TOPS. NNNGGHGHHHHH AND I THOUGHT DAWN WAS AYA(FROM MAD FATHER) WTF. WHEN I READ "red bow" AND "raven" I WAS LIKE OMFG ITS AYA AND THEN SHE SAID HER NAME IS DAWN. AND OH MY GOSH WHY WONT YOU TURN THIS INTO AN M?! THE SEXUAL ATMOSPHERE IS KILLIN MEEEEEEEEEEEE AND I GUARANTEE IF YOU UPDATE MORE, IMAGINE ALL THOSE REVIEWS,FAV,FOLLOWS...YOU'LL BE A SUPER AUTHOR! OH GOSH PLEASE UPDATE! WHEN I SAW THE LAST TIME YOU UPDATE I WAS COMPLETELY BUMMED BUT HEY! YOU'RE AWESOME AND *CAPS LOCK OFF* your writing skill can easily outmatched fifthy shades of grey(i have to say...its too porno to be a romance novel. ellie goulding's "love me like you do" gives a lot.) please man! you HAVE to continue! and, now, to my trademark's last word encouragement. keep up the g'work!
THIS. IS. UNEXPECTED. SUPER POWERFUL WITCH VIOLA?! OH MY GOSH THIS IS INSAAAANNNELY ONE OF THE GREATEST PLOT. EVER. PLUS WITH YOUR WRITING STYLE, I WANT TO READ MORE AND MORE AND MOOOOREEEE. GAAAAAAHHHH CANT STOP USING CAPS! MY FEELINGS FOR THIS FANFICTION IS SOOOOOOO BIG THE WORDS I TYPED GOT BIGGER TOO. AND OH WOW. I. LOVE. THIS. BUT IM A LIL SAD BECAUSE VIOLA TOPS. TCH. I WAS REAAAALLY HOPING ELLEN TOPS Y'KNOW. BASICALLY ELLEN'S BODY TOPS BUT VIOLA'S MIND TOPS. NNNGGHGHHHHH AND I THOUGHT DAWN WAS AYA(FROM MAD FATHER) WTF. WHEN I READ "red bow" AND "raven" I WAS LIKE OMFG ITS AYA AND THEN SHE SAID HER NAME IS DAWN. AND OH MY GOSH WHY WONT YOU TURN THIS INTO AN M?! THE SEXUAL ATMOSPHERE IS KILLIN MEEEEEEEEEEEE AND I GUARANTEE IF YOU UPDATE MORE, IMAGINE ALL THOSE REVIEWS,FAV,FOLLOWS...YOU'LL BE A SUPER AUTHOR! OH GOSH PLEASE UPDATE! WHEN I SAW THE LAST TIME YOU UPDATE I WAS COMPLETELY BUMMED BUT HEY! YOU'RE AWESOME AND *CAPS LOCK OFF* your writing skill can easily outmatched fifthy shades of grey(i have to say...its too porno to be a romance novel. ellie goulding's "love me like you do" gives a lot.) please man! you HAVE to continue! and, now, to my trademark's last word encouragement. keep up the g'work!
3/19/2015 c5 Chapter 6
Do more!
Do more!
2/23/2015 c5 YuriGal1987
OMG! I love this fanfic so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!
OMG! I love this fanfic so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!
2/5/2015 c5 4Watcherman98
Things are getting more and more interesting i'm still a little scared for the future because of how thick this plot is some many theories so little time oh well i shall wait like everyone else and be astounded by such things keep up the good work!
4Watcherman98Things are getting more and more interesting i'm still a little scared for the future because of how thick this plot is some many theories so little time oh well i shall wait like everyone else and be astounded by such things keep up the good work!