for Broken
62/7/2014 c14 Notinusedeletedaccountsorry
Awwwww it's ending! Well at least she made a friend. Update sooooooon!
Awwwww it's ending! Well at least she made a friend. Update sooooooon!
2/7/2014 c14 GrimFWaters
I did like the chapter and of course I am reviewing? What kind of friend would I be if I didn't read and review your stories? NOT a good one- that is for sure. Ryder kinda reminds me of a friendlier version of Leah, which is nice.
I also like the less common names you use in your story- or at least they are less common where I live.
You are beautiful.
-The Queen
I did like the chapter and of course I am reviewing? What kind of friend would I be if I didn't read and review your stories? NOT a good one- that is for sure. Ryder kinda reminds me of a friendlier version of Leah, which is nice.
I also like the less common names you use in your story- or at least they are less common where I live.
You are beautiful.
-The Queen
2/2/2014 c13 Grimfwaters
Hey I don't hav another way to contact you. I just wanted to let you know I am out of town for a few days. I only have my iPod so I can't PM you :(
Talk to you Tuesday.
-grim
Hey I don't hav another way to contact you. I just wanted to let you know I am out of town for a few days. I only have my iPod so I can't PM you :(
Talk to you Tuesday.
-grim
1/31/2014 c13 Notinusedeletedaccountsorry
Really good chapter! I loved it, I like ryders personality! UPDATE SOON!
Really good chapter! I loved it, I like ryders personality! UPDATE SOON!
1/30/2014 c12 GrimFWaters
I wouldn't go as far as to say that I am nice, but I am reviewing! I am reviewing for the puppies!
This story really i incredible. The plot is well thought out:) Like I said before, it is moving a liiiittttlllee bit fast, but I get bored easily, so that is okay!
You are amazing and Jesus love you!
I wouldn't go as far as to say that I am nice, but I am reviewing! I am reviewing for the puppies!
This story really i incredible. The plot is well thought out:) Like I said before, it is moving a liiiittttlllee bit fast, but I get bored easily, so that is okay!
You are amazing and Jesus love you!
1/30/2014 c9 GrimFWaters
You are such a great writer! I wish I wrote this well at your age. The pace of the story is moving a littttle bit fast, but it is much better than moving way too slow :D
You rock
You are such a great writer! I wish I wrote this well at your age. The pace of the story is moving a littttle bit fast, but it is much better than moving way too slow :D
You rock
1/30/2014 c8 GrimFWaters
Aw. You killed Luke?
Well sometimes you have to lose everything before you can appreciate anything.
Aw. You killed Luke?
Well sometimes you have to lose everything before you can appreciate anything.
1/30/2014 c2 GrimFWaters
I feel like a terrible friend! I should have read this story sooner! I AM SO SORRY!
I read the description and I was like "ehhh that sounds okay"
But now I am reading it, and it is awesome!
You rock.
I feel like a terrible friend! I should have read this story sooner! I AM SO SORRY!
I read the description and I was like "ehhh that sounds okay"
But now I am reading it, and it is awesome!
You rock.