for Whispering Winds8/24/2017 c12 Guest
Umm... check your disclaimer for chapter 12
Umm... check your disclaimer for chapter 12
3/5/2015 c5 
2Hektols
I wanted to give this story a chance but this chapter is the last straw with Naruto's 'friends' rejecting Hinata just for the drama and then Naruto foolishly wants to be still acknowledged by a village who hates the girl he loves. It is as stupid as a black man wanting to be part of the KKK or a jew being part of the Nazi Party.
2HektolsI wanted to give this story a chance but this chapter is the last straw with Naruto's 'friends' rejecting Hinata just for the drama and then Naruto foolishly wants to be still acknowledged by a village who hates the girl he loves. It is as stupid as a black man wanting to be part of the KKK or a jew being part of the Nazi Party.
2/1/2015 c4 Guest
Naruto: WHY ARE YOU TORTURING ME LIKE THIS?!
Naruto: WHY ARE YOU TORTURING ME LIKE THIS?!
12/24/2014 c12 Guest
I'll bet that the moment of Naruto being on top of her while she wasn't wearing
a shirt has been burned into Hinata's brain.
I'll bet that the moment of Naruto being on top of her while she wasn't wearing
a shirt has been burned into Hinata's brain.
12/24/2014 c1 Guest
You gotta keep this story going. Do not stop until you finish it.
You gotta keep this story going. Do not stop until you finish it.