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12/21/2013 c1 13Velvet D'Coolette
Tails certainly had a shock when he turned Dark. You’ve caught on to the core theme of Tails’ relationship with Bunnie and Sally by showing them caring for him when he turns back. It looks from your stories that you very much like the theme of warmth among the freedom fighters.

Well done for breaking this story into paragraphs. It made it easier to read, as did the speech marks.

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