for Black Knight11/29/2022 c9 Fredward1
There’s “making him out to be the bad guy” and then there’s “making him an asshole to everyone who likes him remotely for some illogical reason even after learning a ton of things”. It’s like every step he takes forward, you yeet him back. And it’s not subtle and there isn’t character development. He literally went from being super chill and slightly cocky one chapter in the beginning to a fucking douche the next.
There’s “making him out to be the bad guy” and then there’s “making him an asshole to everyone who likes him remotely for some illogical reason even after learning a ton of things”. It’s like every step he takes forward, you yeet him back. And it’s not subtle and there isn’t character development. He literally went from being super chill and slightly cocky one chapter in the beginning to a fucking douche the next.
9/5/2022 c1 maskaggarwal
Can anyone tell me what is tier 3 manipulation for wind as I was unable to find it in the story
Can anyone tell me what is tier 3 manipulation for wind as I was unable to find it in the story
8/21/2022 c14 Guest
I could easily add anko into the harem
I could easily add anko into the harem
8/21/2022 c8 Guest
Well I hope he gets back with yugao can't wait to get with kurenai I also want him to get with anko and now May if that's how you spell it
Well I hope he gets back with yugao can't wait to get with kurenai I also want him to get with anko and now May if that's how you spell it
6/4/2022 c28 Kishin
I hope you return to this story soon. Good luck in all your stories plague.
I hope you return to this story soon. Good luck in all your stories plague.
5/28/2022 c1 Monkey King Omega
is kushina a bad person for hating her husband's bastard (affair) child
is kushina a bad person for hating her husband's bastard (affair) child
5/15/2022 c12 Guest
I hope you don't continue this shit fest you suck
I hope you don't continue this shit fest you suck
4/23/2022 c28 
1Reaping Shadow
Really could use an update on this, just reread it for the fourth time.
1Reaping ShadowReally could use an update on this, just reread it for the fourth time.
2/13/2022 c7 Fredward1
If naruto gets ems, he should take nagatos Rinnegan since they are actually madaras eyes, his grandfather. It makes sense and if he encounters nagato somewhere, he could probably notice the eyes aren’t just Rinnegan and that they are sharingan and put the pieces together realizing that the only sharingan that could reach that stage would be madaras very own eyes.
If naruto gets ems, he should take nagatos Rinnegan since they are actually madaras eyes, his grandfather. It makes sense and if he encounters nagato somewhere, he could probably notice the eyes aren’t just Rinnegan and that they are sharingan and put the pieces together realizing that the only sharingan that could reach that stage would be madaras very own eyes.
12/26/2021 c2 MonkeyDGabry
I binge read most of your stories but this one i can't continue, it's too cringe. Maybe becuase its from 2013. It has all the cringe tropes at the time ahah.
I binge read most of your stories but this one i can't continue, it's too cringe. Maybe becuase its from 2013. It has all the cringe tropes at the time ahah.
7/11/2021 c1 corjca1
nice father well the silly cunt fathered him ah arsehole what a wanker gives men a bad name
nice father well the silly cunt fathered him ah arsehole what a wanker gives men a bad name
7/4/2021 c5 Guest
Naruto forgives very easily. Thats a good thing. I'd rape his fucking kids, his mother, and his wife, and I'd bet this limpdick cuck would forgive me instantly and hake my hand. Fucking dumbass.
Naruto forgives very easily. Thats a good thing. I'd rape his fucking kids, his mother, and his wife, and I'd bet this limpdick cuck would forgive me instantly and hake my hand. Fucking dumbass.
5/30/2021 c1 Yami Fenikkusu
Kushina is the whore of a stepmother for this naruto and some Uchiha woman is, This Naruto mother.
Kushina is the whore of a stepmother for this naruto and some Uchiha woman is, This Naruto mother.