8/23/2015 c1 2WolfsongDarkforest
Are you ever going to continue this story?

12/16/2014 c1 6Voldy's pink teddy
Interesting story so far. Poor Lokes. Odin sounds...pretty abusive in this story. Yes, he's not the best dad in the movies, but I can't see him locking a six year old in the basement with no food and water. Comic and myth Odin, on the other hand, I can totally see doing that. However, as Loki is human in this story, going more than forty-eight hours without water would have killed him, unless...his magic kept him alive somehow, like Neville's did when his uncle tried to kill him? Anyway, Odin sounds horribly abusive, and not just to his son, but to his wife. Forbidding her to see her son while he was being starved to death is one of the most cruel things he could have done to a mother. I find his relationship with Frigga in the Thor movies to be slightly emotionally abusive, or at least, you could interpret it that way, but I see that emotional abuse as being the result of the power-imbalance inherent to being in a relationship with someone whose word is absolute law, not (usually) deliberate malice. I didn't understand why Frigga didn't seem angrier at him for forbidding her to see her son in Thor 2, but perhaps it was because she knows that Odin has a hair-trigger temper, and would have relented eventually, if not for Loki's sake, then for hers.

Additionally, while I enjoyed this story so far, I think that maybe if you had a beta-reader to check your grammar before you post, it would make it easier to read.

Thank you for sharing! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

4/13/2014 c1 3DarthGranola
Please update soon this is a really interesting idea!

12/28/2013 c1 14Cuore l'anima della
This seems like a very interesting story and I am looking foreward to being able to read more.