for Orphanage11/14/2023 c1 Lord of House Eveningshade
A orphanage for child stories ready to be adopted and allowed to grow... Very interesting.
A orphanage for child stories ready to be adopted and allowed to grow... Very interesting.
10/15/2022 c19 heffronma5
I would like you to continue this wonderful story if you get the time to do so.
I would like you to continue this wonderful story if you get the time to do so.
3/30/2022 c19 Guest
Please continue fallen hero
Please continue fallen hero
12/25/2021 c12 
4Hadrian von Eveschatten
This is another story on my maybe adoption list!
I hope Harry will turn the tables on Morgana and have her wrapped around his finger instead!
4Hadrian von EveschattenThis is another story on my maybe adoption list!
I hope Harry will turn the tables on Morgana and have her wrapped around his finger instead!
12/25/2021 c10 Hadrian von Eveschatten
This is a very intriguing premise. I'll be sure to keep it in mind for adoption!
This is a very intriguing premise. I'll be sure to keep it in mind for adoption!
12/10/2021 c18 Hadrian von Eveschatten
So, why doesn't Karasuba just assassinate Issei using her insane speed or when they're no witnesses? I wholeheartedly agree with not stupidly giving Devils access to any SGs. Yet despite that, you, another author, once again gives Devils everything they want.
I can't wait for Harry's fourth faction to make their grand entrance to the Supernatural World.
So, why doesn't Karasuba just assassinate Issei using her insane speed or when they're no witnesses? I wholeheartedly agree with not stupidly giving Devils access to any SGs. Yet despite that, you, another author, once again gives Devils everything they want.
I can't wait for Harry's fourth faction to make their grand entrance to the Supernatural World.
12/10/2021 c16 Hadrian von Eveschatten
Venelana made the wrong choice and I hope House Gremory falls into ruin.
Grayfia rightfully deserves to be called the humiliating title of Whore Queen. For me, her getting together with the disgusting Sirzechs isn't the issue; rather, it's she had done so while still in a relationship with Harry. If she wanted to end the relationship, she should've at least had the decency to do so upfront. That said, I hope Millicas dies from some terminal disease, because I wish for there to be zero biological trace of evidence of Grayfia and Sirzechs' union.
When Irisviel was introduced in the previous chapter, I originally thought it was Akitsu from Sekirei from her description and circumstance.
Harry and Iris' daughter, Illyasviel, is a cutie pie and must be protected at all costs!
Venelana made the wrong choice and I hope House Gremory falls into ruin.
Grayfia rightfully deserves to be called the humiliating title of Whore Queen. For me, her getting together with the disgusting Sirzechs isn't the issue; rather, it's she had done so while still in a relationship with Harry. If she wanted to end the relationship, she should've at least had the decency to do so upfront. That said, I hope Millicas dies from some terminal disease, because I wish for there to be zero biological trace of evidence of Grayfia and Sirzechs' union.
When Irisviel was introduced in the previous chapter, I originally thought it was Akitsu from Sekirei from her description and circumstance.
Harry and Iris' daughter, Illyasviel, is a cutie pie and must be protected at all costs!
12/2/2021 c3 18nagiten
isnt harry the head of the kendo club? thus it his duty to ensure their safety in all forms? so why would the need to pay him?
18nagitenisnt harry the head of the kendo club? thus it his duty to ensure their safety in all forms? so why would the need to pay him?
12/2/2021 c2 nagiten
how did sirius die if harry wasnt in britian thus sirius shouldnt of been ether? since the reason he died in canon was harry been tricked into goign to the DOM ,also wasnt harry been a bit of a hpyocrite with the whole keeping secrets thing with akeno..since they were pretty much doing it for the same reasons
how did sirius die if harry wasnt in britian thus sirius shouldnt of been ether? since the reason he died in canon was harry been tricked into goign to the DOM ,also wasnt harry been a bit of a hpyocrite with the whole keeping secrets thing with akeno..since they were pretty much doing it for the same reasons
9/5/2021 c4 30DalkonCledwin
I’d honestly have made the Peverell’s one of the Extra Demon families, rather than having them be one of the 72 Pillars, since the 72 Pillars are all named as of the current point in time.
30DalkonCledwinI’d honestly have made the Peverell’s one of the Extra Demon families, rather than having them be one of the 72 Pillars, since the 72 Pillars are all named as of the current point in time.
4/2/2021 c4 2Lordlexx
Your weebish tendencies are glaring through with making the sword a fucking katana. Why the actual fuck would it be a katana? Christianity had literally no presence in the orients over a hundred years ago much less 800 years. Hell the katana was just being thought of in that era if I remember right.
I understand being a fan of something and wanting to work it into your story, but don't do it to the detriment of your story.
2LordlexxYour weebish tendencies are glaring through with making the sword a fucking katana. Why the actual fuck would it be a katana? Christianity had literally no presence in the orients over a hundred years ago much less 800 years. Hell the katana was just being thought of in that era if I remember right.
I understand being a fan of something and wanting to work it into your story, but don't do it to the detriment of your story.
4/2/2021 c3 Lordlexx
This is actually pretty interesting but the fact you are using an OC for the "main" girl is dreadful. There is an abundance of women in DxD, there's very little reason to make one up.
This is actually pretty interesting but the fact you are using an OC for the "main" girl is dreadful. There is an abundance of women in DxD, there's very little reason to make one up.
8/10/2020 c5 lldv0524
Who adopted this because I would want you to continue this amazing story. CHAPTER 3-5.
Who adopted this because I would want you to continue this amazing story. CHAPTER 3-5.