for BARF4/22/2003 c8 
17Blue6 - Blood66
*combing hair, hearing the strands cut* geez! I've fun enough on reading your fic that I decided to comb my hair to free from tangles. You're probably thinking what's the connection hehehe... I'm getting this headache once again, sorry.
so the chappie.. is.. impressive. Lovesick Micchy, eh? Eheheh I like the character of Kazui Takamoto... reminds me of some punk guy I saw in fear factor, who I think is very attractive. *cackles* hehehe the mood between Yuri and Mitsui is really changing, eh? Yuri smiled at him? ehehe I'm beginning to wonder what they would become... some bickering love team? That would've been cool. *beams* it would totally destroy judy ann and piolo's sickening-vomit-inducing definition of total mushiness. ahehehehe!
and this is the part where I should say, upload soon! before that, I would have to declare my devotion to you... oh goddess of SD fics! Sounds familiar? bet you do! No, I was just joking! I'm so caught up with the forum-like review section of that story, and it amused me that if I get so bored again, I think I would resort to that place. I have a weird enthusiasm over debates, you see. hehehe
seriously, you have to upload soon. I mean, real soon. I don't read much SD fics anymore, but I think I'm hooked to this fic now. It's getting pretty interesting, so watcha doin'? write, write! bakasyon na noh? *beams* but you could take your time, I'll wait. you did a very nice job on writing this story, so keep it up!
17Blue6 - Blood66*combing hair, hearing the strands cut* geez! I've fun enough on reading your fic that I decided to comb my hair to free from tangles. You're probably thinking what's the connection hehehe... I'm getting this headache once again, sorry.
so the chappie.. is.. impressive. Lovesick Micchy, eh? Eheheh I like the character of Kazui Takamoto... reminds me of some punk guy I saw in fear factor, who I think is very attractive. *cackles* hehehe the mood between Yuri and Mitsui is really changing, eh? Yuri smiled at him? ehehe I'm beginning to wonder what they would become... some bickering love team? That would've been cool. *beams* it would totally destroy judy ann and piolo's sickening-vomit-inducing definition of total mushiness. ahehehehe!
and this is the part where I should say, upload soon! before that, I would have to declare my devotion to you... oh goddess of SD fics! Sounds familiar? bet you do! No, I was just joking! I'm so caught up with the forum-like review section of that story, and it amused me that if I get so bored again, I think I would resort to that place. I have a weird enthusiasm over debates, you see. hehehe
seriously, you have to upload soon. I mean, real soon. I don't read much SD fics anymore, but I think I'm hooked to this fic now. It's getting pretty interesting, so watcha doin'? write, write! bakasyon na noh? *beams* but you could take your time, I'll wait. you did a very nice job on writing this story, so keep it up!
4/22/2003 c7 Blue6 - Blood66
Aheheheheh~! I'm reviewing every chapter I missed because I just think your chappies need the right praise. After ten minutes of reading the chapter, I think my siblings are thinking weird thoughts about me now because I laugh without a reason. Heehee... And probably I couldn't write the angst fic I'm continuing now, because of your humor. aha-ha-ahehehehe... blahs blah about my ranting, off to the serious side.
ehehe kulet ni Micchy! The characterization you built in this fic, especially on Mitsui, has a very entertaining effect. Who knows that Mitsui thought that way? That was so hilarious! Yuri, in contrast to the first chapter, doesn't seem to be so nerdy at all. I like her character too. ^-^ bwahahah! the bickering of Nayuki and Sara was absolutely ... uh ... any synonyms for funny? I seem to get lost from my vocabulary...
so to cut the not-so-long review short, I loved the chappie 'coz of the humor, and thank goodness it's not even mushy. I liked fics like this where mushiness doesn't invade totally, but the implications are all there.
nice, nice! ^-^
Aheheheheh~! I'm reviewing every chapter I missed because I just think your chappies need the right praise. After ten minutes of reading the chapter, I think my siblings are thinking weird thoughts about me now because I laugh without a reason. Heehee... And probably I couldn't write the angst fic I'm continuing now, because of your humor. aha-ha-ahehehehe... blahs blah about my ranting, off to the serious side.
ehehe kulet ni Micchy! The characterization you built in this fic, especially on Mitsui, has a very entertaining effect. Who knows that Mitsui thought that way? That was so hilarious! Yuri, in contrast to the first chapter, doesn't seem to be so nerdy at all. I like her character too. ^-^ bwahahah! the bickering of Nayuki and Sara was absolutely ... uh ... any synonyms for funny? I seem to get lost from my vocabulary...
so to cut the not-so-long review short, I loved the chappie 'coz of the humor, and thank goodness it's not even mushy. I liked fics like this where mushiness doesn't invade totally, but the implications are all there.
nice, nice! ^-^
4/22/2003 c6 Blue6 - Blood66
Heya! After a long time of receiving no reviews from me, here I am again! *waves* so on with the review...
I really found it nice, once again. Your humor is very natural. It didn't make me a bit bored, actually adding some humor to the thing I read these days made me lighten up a bit (I'm mostly reading angst-filled fics kasi eh..). Gah... now that I read those reviews from that stupid fic (you-know-what), I'm kinda awkward on giving you praises... Geez. Guess I'll be doing it in the hard way. *smiles*
Hehehe... it's kinda funny imagining Sara that way, especially in that part where she thought, 'We're like playing the Amazing Race... cool!'. Ehehehehe She awfully projects a braindead person or something who is obsessed with TV. *cackles* And also that part were Ayu and Mitsui were left with Rukawa... *cackles* you made Rukawa sound like a kid or a brainless bully. *stops* wait, am I already praising you or making it turn the bad way again? geesh!
But I liked the chapter. Hard to control laughing out loud when you imagine Mitsui being like that. ^-^
Heya! After a long time of receiving no reviews from me, here I am again! *waves* so on with the review...
I really found it nice, once again. Your humor is very natural. It didn't make me a bit bored, actually adding some humor to the thing I read these days made me lighten up a bit (I'm mostly reading angst-filled fics kasi eh..). Gah... now that I read those reviews from that stupid fic (you-know-what), I'm kinda awkward on giving you praises... Geez. Guess I'll be doing it in the hard way. *smiles*
Hehehe... it's kinda funny imagining Sara that way, especially in that part where she thought, 'We're like playing the Amazing Race... cool!'. Ehehehehe She awfully projects a braindead person or something who is obsessed with TV. *cackles* And also that part were Ayu and Mitsui were left with Rukawa... *cackles* you made Rukawa sound like a kid or a brainless bully. *stops* wait, am I already praising you or making it turn the bad way again? geesh!
But I liked the chapter. Hard to control laughing out loud when you imagine Mitsui being like that. ^-^
3/29/2003 c8 26Hisashi Loves Yelen
Sorry this is late. I didn't know you updated 'cause I wasn't on the site for quite a while.
Anyway, nice chapter, as always. Laughed out loud at some bits. *scrolls page to check*
“ NO. Actually, Mitsui sweetie, it’s Yuri, the girl of your dreams…”
“ …”
“ I just called to say that I’m really a guy whose dying to be in your arms and -“
Hehehehe.
Nice work. Update soon.
26Hisashi Loves YelenSorry this is late. I didn't know you updated 'cause I wasn't on the site for quite a while.
Anyway, nice chapter, as always. Laughed out loud at some bits. *scrolls page to check*
“ NO. Actually, Mitsui sweetie, it’s Yuri, the girl of your dreams…”
“ …”
“ I just called to say that I’m really a guy whose dying to be in your arms and -“
Hehehehe.
Nice work. Update soon.
2/22/2003 c8 karen goddess
I love it again..
I love it again..
2/22/2003 c7 karen goddess
I like it. write more.
I like it. write more.
2/22/2003 c6 karen goddess
Not confusing. not confusing.
Not confusing. not confusing.
2/22/2003 c5 karen goddess
I love it!
I love it!
2/22/2003 c4 karen goddess
More More!
More More!
2/22/2003 c3 karen goddess
me too, me too. What can they talk about?
me too, me too. What can they talk about?
2/22/2003 c2 karen goddess
your fic makes perfect sense.
your fic makes perfect sense.
2/22/2003 c1 karen goddess
lol that was funny.
lol that was funny.
2/17/2003 c8 yasu
nice fic!
i LOVE mitsui! haha!
continue! i'll be following your story..
good luck! (`@')
nice fic!
i LOVE mitsui! haha!
continue! i'll be following your story..
good luck! (`@')
2/9/2003 c8 1mizzpeppermint
Oi!
when r u gonna update! ang tagal nman! *_*hehe... really like this story of urs cuz i my mum once enrolled me in a tutorial center! la lang...
1mizzpeppermintOi!
when r u gonna update! ang tagal nman! *_*hehe... really like this story of urs cuz i my mum once enrolled me in a tutorial center! la lang...
2/4/2003 c8 6akuma-tenshi
awwww... shucks! this chapter is really sweet. ^_^
especially the 'she smiled for me' part... hehe you know... when yuri's smile was for mitsui and mitsui alone. teeheehee
gomen... i'm getting to fluffy and waffy moments again. .!.
6akuma-tenshiawwww... shucks! this chapter is really sweet. ^_^
especially the 'she smiled for me' part... hehe you know... when yuri's smile was for mitsui and mitsui alone. teeheehee
gomen... i'm getting to fluffy and waffy moments again. .!.