for Day in Shanghai - Story of an engineer10/10/2014 c1 Guest
Good grammar usage and the story is an inner depth of the siege of Shanghai . I like it
Good grammar usage and the story is an inner depth of the siege of Shanghai . I like it
3/15/2014 c1 Strigon111
Some basic grammatical and spelling errors. Also, for names, you can use numbers, like 6th Mechanized Division or M4. Also keep in mind plural and singular forms. Apart from that, the story is good.
Some basic grammatical and spelling errors. Also, for names, you can use numbers, like 6th Mechanized Division or M4. Also keep in mind plural and singular forms. Apart from that, the story is good.
1/14/2014 c1 j.r
needs more camping recons... good grammar
needs more camping recons... good grammar