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5/11/2016 c11 lovergirldeath1827
I love this. It's amazing
1/10/2014 c1 couroo
I love the series and this is just as good or better. 3
12/18/2013 c7 11Senile-felineS
Awww! I'm really glad you updated, i've been checking every night for several days now. I really hope you can put up more of this before you stop. Are you going to give up reading fanfic as well as writing it?
12/11/2013 c6 Senile-felineS
ABC's i can accept, but surely etiquette is a little advanced for a 2 year old? I had trouble with that when i was 4. Otherwise, good chapter. Very sweet, especially eclipse and luna. Or eclipse protecting her reputation, in a sense. It's really cute.
12/11/2013 c5 23Yoitemichealis
OMG they're too cute 3 Sorry I haven't been reviewing, I usually read fanfictions on my phone and it doesn't let me review. Love this story though, it's so cute
12/9/2013 c5 5Vulpix's Fire
Another great chapter. I can't wait until Luna meets Lord Krayon. I can't help but laugh at that thought.
12/9/2013 c5 11Senile-felineS
Eclipse is epic! Seriously. Although Luna's education seems a little advanced, having learned menial tasks before the age of 4 seems to be pushing it.
12/8/2013 c4 5Vulpix's Fire
Awe that was so cute. I don't know why but I could totally picture Raenef as a father. Picturing Eclipse taking care of a child just seems a little funny. I really like this story.
12/7/2013 c4 145Dlbn
Awww she's so cute! 3 Hehe Eclipse scares small children XD

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12/7/2013 c4 11Senile-felineS
It is possible that she remembered to much (although i am by no means an expert on this stuff, i've just gleened bits and pieces). But i liked the way you described things, the vague terms and definitions-by-feel make sense in terms of a young child's way of understanding the world.
12/7/2013 c3 Senile-felineS
Aw! So chibby. Although eclipse is nicer than me, i would klap a child for pulling on my earing. I look forward to reading the rest of this.
12/6/2013 c2 Senile-felineS
So, if raenef was married to leeche, is it safe to assume that this will not be eclipse/raenef?
12/6/2013 c1 Senile-felineS
Reminds me a bit of silas marner. Quite cute, i am particularly curious to see how eclipse handles this.
12/6/2013 c1 145Dlbn
Aw, even as a big, bad Demon Lord, Raenef is still a sweet little guy :3 I wonder how they will fare at being fathers. I can't wait for the next part!

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