for Sound and Fury2/3/2015 c1 
10She11y
I loved this! Not just the story itself (which was incredibly cute by the way) but your vocabulary choices , descriptions and how you kept the different tenses consistent. Just simple things like that make a fanfiction so much more enjoyable. :)
10She11yI loved this! Not just the story itself (which was incredibly cute by the way) but your vocabulary choices , descriptions and how you kept the different tenses consistent. Just simple things like that make a fanfiction so much more enjoyable. :)
8/14/2014 c1 Pale Treasures
This was so beautiful, very much in character and gorgeously written. Great work!
This was so beautiful, very much in character and gorgeously written. Great work!
5/15/2014 c1 Guest
Ah! God that was good! I mean I love a good romp but that was just so romantic and beautiful! And REAL. I mean let's be honest everyone wonders if they are being loud or if they should be loud or is it weird to be loud or why isn't he/she/whomever also being loud and I just loved this. This has become one of my favorites! Keep up the great work!
Ah! God that was good! I mean I love a good romp but that was just so romantic and beautiful! And REAL. I mean let's be honest everyone wonders if they are being loud or if they should be loud or is it weird to be loud or why isn't he/she/whomever also being loud and I just loved this. This has become one of my favorites! Keep up the great work!
4/13/2014 c1 4Mrs.Moony86
I loved this fic! I especially loved how sound plays such a large part in their lovemaking.
Great work.
4Mrs.Moony86I loved this fic! I especially loved how sound plays such a large part in their lovemaking.
Great work.
4/1/2014 c1 1Ethereal Star Dragon
That was precious and you captured Anna and Kristoff's personalities perfectly without it being awkward considering the adult themes!
1Ethereal Star DragonThat was precious and you captured Anna and Kristoff's personalities perfectly without it being awkward considering the adult themes!
3/3/2014 c1 40Concolor44
"Anna's more than enough."
Wow. That's pretty damn deep, Kris. You been studying? I can't think of anything you might have said at that juncture that would have been better. Hit the APPLAUSE button!
My word. They have quite the towering love, don't they? I read in your profile that you are training to be a professional writer of some stripe. Well, kudos! You are well on your way.
Adding this one to Favorites, too. (I'm sensing a pattern here ...)
40Concolor44"Anna's more than enough."
Wow. That's pretty damn deep, Kris. You been studying? I can't think of anything you might have said at that juncture that would have been better. Hit the APPLAUSE button!
My word. They have quite the towering love, don't they? I read in your profile that you are training to be a professional writer of some stripe. Well, kudos! You are well on your way.
Adding this one to Favorites, too. (I'm sensing a pattern here ...)
2/27/2014 c1 Kissi
Yes. Just... yes, perfect.
Yes. Just... yes, perfect.
2/24/2014 c1 Guest
Idk why but I almost burst out laughing during some scenes, but I love this, your writing is beautiful. :)
Idk why but I almost burst out laughing during some scenes, but I love this, your writing is beautiful. :)
2/22/2014 c1 Bonsoir
Gah, this was so sweet that it hurt. I think you get Anna's chattiness down just so well in these stories-the way she rambles is so cute and ahhh. Basically I have nothing intelligent to say about this one except that it was really sweet and I enjoyed it. :)
Gah, this was so sweet that it hurt. I think you get Anna's chattiness down just so well in these stories-the way she rambles is so cute and ahhh. Basically I have nothing intelligent to say about this one except that it was really sweet and I enjoyed it. :)
2/9/2014 c1 39StarlingChild4
Seriously, it wasn't until you came along when I realized I actually ENJOY this kind of fanfiction! I mean, in the realm of Disney, that is... Harry Potter is one thing, but Disney? Never expected to love it so much... I guess it helps that 1) you stay true to the characters and don't just have "pointless" smut for the sake of fanservive, 2) your writing is fantastic, and 3) you balance out delicious juicy details with sweet, tender affections, something a LOT of writers, both fanfic and not, fail at. Well done. :)
39StarlingChild4Seriously, it wasn't until you came along when I realized I actually ENJOY this kind of fanfiction! I mean, in the realm of Disney, that is... Harry Potter is one thing, but Disney? Never expected to love it so much... I guess it helps that 1) you stay true to the characters and don't just have "pointless" smut for the sake of fanservive, 2) your writing is fantastic, and 3) you balance out delicious juicy details with sweet, tender affections, something a LOT of writers, both fanfic and not, fail at. Well done. :)