for Darker On The Outside6/19/2019 c1 Taylor Richter
Why is Pitch Black is even story I read why I love Elsa and Jack Frost and if course pitch black too I love Jack Frost because he is so funny to me even time I read all the story I have my tab thank you for let me know what happened to Jack Frost and Queen Elsa
Why is Pitch Black is even story I read why I love Elsa and Jack Frost and if course pitch black too I love Jack Frost because he is so funny to me even time I read all the story I have my tab thank you for let me know what happened to Jack Frost and Queen Elsa
1/8/2015 c5 Xmasgirl9
I am loving this story but it has been quite a while since it has been updated which is a shame. Is their any possible way this could get finished? I would love to read how Jack got to this stage of "dark Jack"
Great story just wish it had an ending
I am loving this story but it has been quite a while since it has been updated which is a shame. Is their any possible way this could get finished? I would love to read how Jack got to this stage of "dark Jack"
Great story just wish it had an ending
8/21/2014 c5 Jason
I think you'll have a story next
I think you'll have a story next
1/5/2014 c3 Guest
This rules. You rule. AWESOME! Continue soon, please! :-)
This rules. You rule. AWESOME! Continue soon, please! :-)
12/8/2013 c1 
20RyuuSiren7
Hey, I really like what you have so far! This looks like it could be really interesting, and I must say, I'm very curious about what's up with Jack's memory loss and Pitch's behavior. I can't wait for more! Ciao for now, DragonSiren7
20RyuuSiren7Hey, I really like what you have so far! This looks like it could be really interesting, and I must say, I'm very curious about what's up with Jack's memory loss and Pitch's behavior. I can't wait for more! Ciao for now, DragonSiren7
12/8/2013 c1 3Cat Girl 1995
definitely interesting, that is for sure. can't wait to see were this will go! and congrats on your first actual story!
3Cat Girl 1995definitely interesting, that is for sure. can't wait to see were this will go! and congrats on your first actual story!
12/6/2013 c1 Guest
please write more this story is so good
please write more this story is so good