for Broken Souls Mend Hearts5/9 c101 shayna.evans09
I just discovered this and couldn’t put it down! Any chance of more chapters?
I just discovered this and couldn’t put it down! Any chance of more chapters?
2/15 c101 Guest
I love love love this story. Please please please update soon. I read this twice in 2 weeks just in case I missed anything the first time. I have some theories and questions. I’ll start with the theories. 1. Killian doesn’t know Jack is their uncle. It all has to do with the magic binding otherwise when he talked to Henry about knowing Jack he would have told him he was his uncle cause Henry would have LOVED it. 2. Killian and Liam’s parents are DEFINITELY Will Turner (aka Davy Jones) and Elizabeth Swan. Jack said something to Liam about their mom being terrifying which is exactly what Jack has said about Elizabeth in the past. 3. Liam doesn’t have magic because he was conceived before Will was Davy Jones. Killian was conceived 10 years later when Will could come back on land and had his Davy Jones magic. 4. TLK will get everyone their memories back but I haven’t figured if it will be Henry and Regina, Outlaw Queen, Captain Cobra, or Wooden Witch. 5. Killian will still drown in the well and that’s how he’ll get his magic but he still won’t know about his parents because of all the crazy of trying to stop George so Blackbeard won’t have a chance to tell him. 6. George will send Nottingham after little Liam and he’s going to find out how powerful Little Liam really is. 7. 3b will end with Blackbeard worried and debating about telling Killian about his magic and parents but he decides what Killian doesn’t know won’t hurt him. 8. The sequel will start after Christmas because in the flash forward they didn’t seem to know about Killian’s kidnapping. 9. Calypso is after them because Will Turner killed the original Davy Jones she was in love with. 10. Snow is pregnant with twins and the best part is neither one will be named Neal! Now with my questions. 1. If the dark curse is the will of the caster why would everyone lose their memories this time? Even if they do would the caster Regina and/or Granny have their memories. In the show the reason everyone lost their memories is because Zelena high jacked the curse. They stopped Rumple from high jacking the curse so why wouldn’t everyone keep their memories? 2. Will Rumple and Neal split again and we get an actual Neal death like canon? 3. Is Liam’s magic more powerful because he’s the product of the product of true love? Since my theory Will Turner and Elizabeth Swan are Killian’s parent their true love too so is that why or does it have to do with Killian’s magic too? If so is Killian’s magic like Liam’s force field and all? 4. If the people who were cursed have no memory then how did Blackbeard know he was holding Liam. Was Killian able to go to Storybrooke and tell Blackbeard hey I know you’re my brother take care of my kid? 5. If they have no memory won’t they wonder what happened to Marco? In past spoilers you said 3 people remember, I’m assuming Killian and Ariel are 2 and the 3rd is either Regina or Granny cause they were the casters. 6. Since Rumple wasn’t able to high jack the curse wouldn’t George, Zelena, and Nottingham not remember their plans? Ok that’s what I’ve got so far. I know you hate begging about updates but I’ve got to cause this story is so good I honestly love every part of it and an totally looking forward to more!
I love love love this story. Please please please update soon. I read this twice in 2 weeks just in case I missed anything the first time. I have some theories and questions. I’ll start with the theories. 1. Killian doesn’t know Jack is their uncle. It all has to do with the magic binding otherwise when he talked to Henry about knowing Jack he would have told him he was his uncle cause Henry would have LOVED it. 2. Killian and Liam’s parents are DEFINITELY Will Turner (aka Davy Jones) and Elizabeth Swan. Jack said something to Liam about their mom being terrifying which is exactly what Jack has said about Elizabeth in the past. 3. Liam doesn’t have magic because he was conceived before Will was Davy Jones. Killian was conceived 10 years later when Will could come back on land and had his Davy Jones magic. 4. TLK will get everyone their memories back but I haven’t figured if it will be Henry and Regina, Outlaw Queen, Captain Cobra, or Wooden Witch. 5. Killian will still drown in the well and that’s how he’ll get his magic but he still won’t know about his parents because of all the crazy of trying to stop George so Blackbeard won’t have a chance to tell him. 6. George will send Nottingham after little Liam and he’s going to find out how powerful Little Liam really is. 7. 3b will end with Blackbeard worried and debating about telling Killian about his magic and parents but he decides what Killian doesn’t know won’t hurt him. 8. The sequel will start after Christmas because in the flash forward they didn’t seem to know about Killian’s kidnapping. 9. Calypso is after them because Will Turner killed the original Davy Jones she was in love with. 10. Snow is pregnant with twins and the best part is neither one will be named Neal! Now with my questions. 1. If the dark curse is the will of the caster why would everyone lose their memories this time? Even if they do would the caster Regina and/or Granny have their memories. In the show the reason everyone lost their memories is because Zelena high jacked the curse. They stopped Rumple from high jacking the curse so why wouldn’t everyone keep their memories? 2. Will Rumple and Neal split again and we get an actual Neal death like canon? 3. Is Liam’s magic more powerful because he’s the product of the product of true love? Since my theory Will Turner and Elizabeth Swan are Killian’s parent their true love too so is that why or does it have to do with Killian’s magic too? If so is Killian’s magic like Liam’s force field and all? 4. If the people who were cursed have no memory then how did Blackbeard know he was holding Liam. Was Killian able to go to Storybrooke and tell Blackbeard hey I know you’re my brother take care of my kid? 5. If they have no memory won’t they wonder what happened to Marco? In past spoilers you said 3 people remember, I’m assuming Killian and Ariel are 2 and the 3rd is either Regina or Granny cause they were the casters. 6. Since Rumple wasn’t able to high jack the curse wouldn’t George, Zelena, and Nottingham not remember their plans? Ok that’s what I’ve got so far. I know you hate begging about updates but I’ve got to cause this story is so good I honestly love every part of it and an totally looking forward to more!
2/14 c101 Guest
I love love love this story I’ve read it twice in like 2 weeks and can’t wait for an update please please please update soon! I had to read it twice cause I feel like I saw more the second time. So I have theories 1. Snow is definitely having twins. The best part is neither baby will be named Neal! 2. Killian doesn’t know Jack is his uncle. It all links back to the magic binding. 3. Killian and Liam’s parents are Will Turner (aka Davy Jones) and Elizabeth Swan. Jack says something to Liam about their mother being terrifying which if I remember correctly is the same thing he says about Elizabeth. Liam was conceived before Will became Davy Jones that’s why he’s not magical. Then 10 years later when Will could return Killian was conceived. 4. Now I think Calypso is looking for revenge for them killing the other Davy Jones cause I think they were in love if I remember from the movies. 5. 3b will go much like canon minus hiding everything from Henry. Regina will either TLK Henry or Robin. I only hope the town doesn’t think Regina cast the curse again and try to blame her. 6. Killian will drown in the well and Emma will save him but his heart will stop and poof powers. 7. You’ll end 3b not with a trip to the past but Killiam getting kidnapped by Calypso’s whoever and that how he winds up in the brig with his father. Now I have questions. 1. Is Brennan Jones the father Killian thinks is his real father and did he kill him like in cannon? 2. If the original dark curse made everyone except Regina lose their memories because that’s how Regina cast it wouldn’t this curse be different because neither Regina or Granny want anyone to forget? (I threw in Granny cause I wasn’t sure if her crushing Marco’s heart meant it was her curse. 3. Since Rumple didn’t succeed in tweaking the curse would it be under Regina and/or Granny’s parameters because in cannon I got the impression when Snow crushed David’s heart the only reason they couldn’t remember anything is because Zelena high jacked the curse. 4. Did Ariel put Killian outside of town? And if so, Liam was in Blackbeard’s care wouldn’t he think it was weird that he suddenly had his nephew and that he was clean shaven? I think maybe Killian talked to him before he left but I wasn’t sure. 5. Is Neal completely done or will he separate from Rumple like in cannon?
I love love love this story I’ve read it twice in like 2 weeks and can’t wait for an update please please please update soon! I had to read it twice cause I feel like I saw more the second time. So I have theories 1. Snow is definitely having twins. The best part is neither baby will be named Neal! 2. Killian doesn’t know Jack is his uncle. It all links back to the magic binding. 3. Killian and Liam’s parents are Will Turner (aka Davy Jones) and Elizabeth Swan. Jack says something to Liam about their mother being terrifying which if I remember correctly is the same thing he says about Elizabeth. Liam was conceived before Will became Davy Jones that’s why he’s not magical. Then 10 years later when Will could return Killian was conceived. 4. Now I think Calypso is looking for revenge for them killing the other Davy Jones cause I think they were in love if I remember from the movies. 5. 3b will go much like canon minus hiding everything from Henry. Regina will either TLK Henry or Robin. I only hope the town doesn’t think Regina cast the curse again and try to blame her. 6. Killian will drown in the well and Emma will save him but his heart will stop and poof powers. 7. You’ll end 3b not with a trip to the past but Killiam getting kidnapped by Calypso’s whoever and that how he winds up in the brig with his father. Now I have questions. 1. Is Brennan Jones the father Killian thinks is his real father and did he kill him like in cannon? 2. If the original dark curse made everyone except Regina lose their memories because that’s how Regina cast it wouldn’t this curse be different because neither Regina or Granny want anyone to forget? (I threw in Granny cause I wasn’t sure if her crushing Marco’s heart meant it was her curse. 3. Since Rumple didn’t succeed in tweaking the curse would it be under Regina and/or Granny’s parameters because in cannon I got the impression when Snow crushed David’s heart the only reason they couldn’t remember anything is because Zelena high jacked the curse. 4. Did Ariel put Killian outside of town? And if so, Liam was in Blackbeard’s care wouldn’t he think it was weird that he suddenly had his nephew and that he was clean shaven? I think maybe Killian talked to him before he left but I wasn’t sure. 5. Is Neal completely done or will he separate from Rumple like in cannon?
2/7 c101 Raindrop0620
Just found this story and I love every word of it! I feel like reading it is all I've been doing in my down time the past week, lol. Absolutely loved their reunion! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Just found this story and I love every word of it! I feel like reading it is all I've been doing in my down time the past week, lol. Absolutely loved their reunion! Can't wait to see what happens next.
1/4 c44 Halotf8401
Oh dear primus, first the force field from the developing baby now emma raises her hands and things freezeyou watched too much charmed like me didnt you
Oh dear primus, first the force field from the developing baby now emma raises her hands and things freezeyou watched too much charmed like me didnt you
12/2/2024 c101 maggicoyle96
AHHHH! i loved their reunion, ive so been looking forward to this. and henry and killians reunion was so sweet and more than i could have hoped for. i cant wait to see what you come up with next. im wondering if liam will know who emma is and if he'll be excited to see his momma again so im excited to see what you have in store for us <3
AHHHH! i loved their reunion, ive so been looking forward to this. and henry and killians reunion was so sweet and more than i could have hoped for. i cant wait to see what you come up with next. im wondering if liam will know who emma is and if he'll be excited to see his momma again so im excited to see what you have in store for us <3
11/3/2024 c101 
16ShiaraS46
I admit. I cried at the Captain Cobra reunion. I was so focused on CS that I forgot to prepare myself for Henry and Killian reuniting.
I'm pretty sure you already answered this before but is BSMH ending at 3b?
16ShiaraS46I admit. I cried at the Captain Cobra reunion. I was so focused on CS that I forgot to prepare myself for Henry and Killian reuniting.
I'm pretty sure you already answered this before but is BSMH ending at 3b?
11/2/2024 c81 depper57
Holy shit, I noticed that you had updated again, it has been a while so I started BSMH all over again and forgot how painful this chapter was. Somehow my Spotify started playing sad music which made it even worse. It was absolutely brilliant and I am a complete wreck, well done!
Holy shit, I noticed that you had updated again, it has been a while so I started BSMH all over again and forgot how painful this chapter was. Somehow my Spotify started playing sad music which made it even worse. It was absolutely brilliant and I am a complete wreck, well done!
11/2/2024 c100 18the Mandalorian terminator
Fantastic chapter! Marco's goodbye had me in tears. George now having control over Rumple spells trouble and makes me wonder what's going to happen with Zalena.
I cannot wait for the next chapter!
18the Mandalorian terminatorFantastic chapter! Marco's goodbye had me in tears. George now having control over Rumple spells trouble and makes me wonder what's going to happen with Zalena.
I cannot wait for the next chapter!
11/1/2024 c100 16ShiaraS46
First off, why?! I am crying here!
Second, how does the binding work? Coz, Blackbeard was right. Killian did die before in Neverland and David brought him back. Unless his heart also stopped when he got into the motorcycle accident before. Regina's already noticing that there's something possibly magical about Killian.
Third, since Emma is getting bits and pieces and feelings about Killian, will she still need the memory potion or will TLK work now?
Fourth, my heart hurts for August. I think it makes sense that he would talk to Belle about Zelena. Not a lot of people has experience falling in love with the villain WHILE they're still the villain.
A lot, I know, but your fault for making this so compelling
16ShiaraS46First off, why?! I am crying here!
Second, how does the binding work? Coz, Blackbeard was right. Killian did die before in Neverland and David brought him back. Unless his heart also stopped when he got into the motorcycle accident before. Regina's already noticing that there's something possibly magical about Killian.
Third, since Emma is getting bits and pieces and feelings about Killian, will she still need the memory potion or will TLK work now?
Fourth, my heart hurts for August. I think it makes sense that he would talk to Belle about Zelena. Not a lot of people has experience falling in love with the villain WHILE they're still the villain.
A lot, I know, but your fault for making this so compelling
11/1/2024 c100 7redangel2463
Oh I know the next chapter is going to make me cry harder then this one.
Great writing!
7redangel2463Oh I know the next chapter is going to make me cry harder then this one.
Great writing!
11/1/2024 c100 12CuppaTea13
Oh Marco's goodbye had me CRYING! My heart broke a little. It's so sad he won't be around any longer.
But clever of them to prevent Rumple or Zelena tampering with the curse! Honestly, good job thinking things through Team Hope! Prep work is everything. I'm so excited for the reunion! Killian and Emma's the most but also just everyone! I have a feeling next chapter will make me cry too!
12CuppaTea13Oh Marco's goodbye had me CRYING! My heart broke a little. It's so sad he won't be around any longer.
But clever of them to prevent Rumple or Zelena tampering with the curse! Honestly, good job thinking things through Team Hope! Prep work is everything. I'm so excited for the reunion! Killian and Emma's the most but also just everyone! I have a feeling next chapter will make me cry too!
9/28/2024 c99 Klw797
Youre back! I started rewatching once upon a time A few days ago, and my roommate said, I might have to read some fan fiction for this. And I thought, you're right, I should too. And my plan was to reread this whole story, even though it takes so long, it is so worth it. Imagine my surprise when I come back and it's been updated after six years. I'm so happy and can't wait to see what next. I hope the last six years have been kind to you and that you're doing well in life.!
Youre back! I started rewatching once upon a time A few days ago, and my roommate said, I might have to read some fan fiction for this. And I thought, you're right, I should too. And my plan was to reread this whole story, even though it takes so long, it is so worth it. Imagine my surprise when I come back and it's been updated after six years. I'm so happy and can't wait to see what next. I hope the last six years have been kind to you and that you're doing well in life.!