for Monster Girls Lust12/21/2021 c1 
1Nevarus
so not to nitpick but this isn't fanfiction. this is a series of shorts that as far as I can tell, is an original. this has nothing to do with monster monsume, except for it containing monsters and having sexual situations...
1Nevarusso not to nitpick but this isn't fanfiction. this is a series of shorts that as far as I can tell, is an original. this has nothing to do with monster monsume, except for it containing monsters and having sexual situations...
12/17/2018 c12 Guest
A better ending would be nice
A better ending would be nice
11/12/2018 c2 Hard to read
Good story idea but horrible grammar, flow and spelling. This could be amazing with some work, but as is its difficult to read and that really takes away from the story
Good story idea but horrible grammar, flow and spelling. This could be amazing with some work, but as is its difficult to read and that really takes away from the story
10/30/2018 c18 James
Pretty good, like a role playing game, but with sex! Crimson gardevoir is my favourite story too.
Pretty good, like a role playing game, but with sex! Crimson gardevoir is my favourite story too.
9/30/2018 c6 Ruberforumfree
What's with you guys writing smut but shy away from calling the penis "member" instead of Cock or "Entrance" Instead of Pussy? This is just silly and it really cut the mood...
What's with you guys writing smut but shy away from calling the penis "member" instead of Cock or "Entrance" Instead of Pussy? This is just silly and it really cut the mood...
9/8/2018 c2 Staggi
I liked the contents and the pacing of the story so far but you may consider getting a beta reader or someone else to check your grammar. :)
I liked the contents and the pacing of the story so far but you may consider getting a beta reader or someone else to check your grammar. :)
5/27/2018 c2 Slavic Nationalism
The premise is of this story is pretty cool but your English is abysmal
The premise is of this story is pretty cool but your English is abysmal
11/22/2017 c26 Guest
Love all your stuff man. Please update the monstergirl ones!
Love all your stuff man. Please update the monstergirl ones!
11/18/2017 c26 moster rapist
raaaaaauyyyyyyyyy
wheres book 2 me want it
raaaaaauyyyyyyyyy
wheres book 2 me want it
11/16/2017 c12 Awesome
She is pretty awesome i would love that to happen to me if only i was that lucky
She is pretty awesome i would love that to happen to me if only i was that lucky