5/10/2020 c3 L
This is a masterpiece, I was sad when I finished it
This is a masterpiece, I was sad when I finished it
1/10/2014 c3 Guest
Omigosh... I loving this! Please continue! You go girl! :3
Omigosh... I loving this! Please continue! You go girl! :3
1/6/2014 c3 gz
Update soon
Update soon
1/6/2014 c3 phyllite
this is sooo awesome! Keep it up! .
this is sooo awesome! Keep it up! .
1/5/2014 c3 4LovelyDomination
AhHahaha! Awesome! :D I love this!
Oh, fourth paragraph says "up my there"; a mistake in Izaya's thought sentence. Normally I wouldn't mention little things but it broke the flow for me a bit and I think your stories are best because they flow so nicely. Almost...like poetry.. but more interesting.
Anyway, I was so happy when I saw you posted another chapter! I love this story.
AhHahaha! Awesome! :D I love this!
Oh, fourth paragraph says "up my there"; a mistake in Izaya's thought sentence. Normally I wouldn't mention little things but it broke the flow for me a bit and I think your stories are best because they flow so nicely. Almost...like poetry.. but more interesting.
Anyway, I was so happy when I saw you posted another chapter! I love this story.
12/20/2013 c2 Guest
It's really cool. You did good.
It's really cool. You did good.
12/18/2013 c2 39Cloudsofsand
Very good3 extremely descriptive which is a talent that not a lot of writers have. I love it 33
Very good3 extremely descriptive which is a talent that not a lot of writers have. I love it 33
12/14/2013 c2 1F0rget-Everything
I don't know what is going to happen next and its killing me! Please write the next chapter soon.
I don't know what is going to happen next and its killing me! Please write the next chapter soon.
12/14/2013 c2 Sasuki- yuu
me gusto mucho este capítulo,hiciste un muy buen trabajo :)
Estaré esperando muy ansiosa el próximo capitulo.
me gusto mucho este capítulo,hiciste un muy buen trabajo :)
Estaré esperando muy ansiosa el próximo capitulo.
12/13/2013 c2 3Virusitic
Wasn't sure if this was still on-going, so I followed xD but this is..really beautifully written and adorable. The description is so perfect 3 I really hope there is more to this, I love how dominating Shizuo is in this aaahhh
Wasn't sure if this was still on-going, so I followed xD but this is..really beautifully written and adorable. The description is so perfect 3 I really hope there is more to this, I love how dominating Shizuo is in this aaahhh
12/8/2013 c1 1mika.siam.71192
Really so good...Pleased to read an other chapter of yours again. I hope to see more soon! :)
Really so good...Pleased to read an other chapter of yours again. I hope to see more soon! :)
12/8/2013 c1 4LovelyDomination
You should write romance novels.
Seriously...that was sexy and exciting on so many levels.
I loved this.. and I would love to read more.
You should write romance novels.
Seriously...that was sexy and exciting on so many levels.
I loved this.. and I would love to read more.