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2/18/2019 c1 RobinRedoe
Ha! Hilarious! You captured them all so well. I enjoyed the dialogue that seemed so true to the characters, and then you topped it all off with that fun pun. You should definitely write more some day! Great fic!
12/27/2013 c1 Guest
Very sweet and funny. Bravo!
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12/11/2013 c1 18The-Time-Travelling-Hippie
Haha! As soon as Murdock said that "nut" line I knew what was coming. Good job.
12/9/2013 c1 Kim Borowiak
Very good punch line.
12/8/2013 c1 23SaraiEsq
heehee
12/8/2013 c1 24Sandilynn Petersen
Oh this was funny! You got the dialogue down really good. I like Face's hedging about getting in trouble saying anything, Hannibal's mischievous statement to Face about riding the fence, B. A.'s defensiveness about anything wrong with his ride and Murdock's insistence about what he heard. Great last line.

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